Due to the fact that my schedule is ridonkulously busy and I don't have the time to thank people for faves. I've come up with a new system. Instead of just thanking, I'll go through the fave list and select random people who faved my work and help them get their page noticed. So for everyone who takes the time to click that button, I thank you kindly.
This was the piece:
How many days do you spend now, putting me down?
The coffin call for a dead man waiting around
"He's just an underground laughing stock, never to rise"
But on the seventh day I'm coming back; these are my ties!
The kind of promise that you made with the devil inside
You try to take away my soul, but I take it in stride
I ain't a doll that is crushed by the weight of his pride
I am the real and the raw of the things you denied!
You're playing snake games, selling oil, pass it off strong
You're just a pot head, weed dead, smoking your bong.
You try to look away, play and hide; apathy's best
But I'm the kind of bad boy you don't put to the test!
-Chen Yuan Wen, 7th February 2013
And these are our lucky winners:
and what a girl she is, check out these cool pieces of hers:
oh dear I do feel the darkness rising, here comes some of hers:
*A World Full of Noise**A World Full of Noise*
Humming machines eat change
Metal horses rumble down
smooth black surfaces,
Water splashes in cold metal
Chairs groan as weight forces
their cushions down,
Leaves clatter as they fall off
Buzzing lights shine on
bored, tired faces.
TreesYou've seen the seasons passing by
Timeless is your tired sigh,
Ageless is your mystery
Filled with so much history,
Skin softened by the slimy snails
Can still be rather tough as nails,
Reaching always for the sky
I wonder what it is you spy,
Days of wonder, days of rot
Filling water in a pot,
Cooking soup on wood of old
Fighting off a nasty cold,
Trees above and trees below
I wonder if they'll ever know,
Casting shadows in the night
Filling me with dreadful fright,
Little faces in the bark
Makes me happy as a lark,
Sitting by my old dear friend
Hoping it will never end.
Bad IdeaIt seemed like a good idea at the time
just a small three wheeler ride it'll be,
I didn't think anything of it
This is great
It's no big deal
Nothing could go wrong
The look on my mother's face
when she pulled up beside us told me different
'Get in the car'
The Silence on the way home was
Anything would have been better than sitting in that silence,
I wish she would have,
Screamed at me
Yelled at me
Something to end the silence. The air was so still it could have been glass
One touch and it would shatter
Not a word was spoken till I was seated at the table
Mom in front of me
Dad leaning against the stove
Grandma across t
she bears hats O3O chec out her stuff:
she loves animals :3
please tell her that she exists ^^
AngelsIf you stand out in a field long enough,
faeries will come to play,
She said to me, with her eyes aglow,
glimmering like snowglobes, and
there were hopes stitched into the hem of her dress.
She always smiled.
If not with peony lips, then with
emerald eyes reflecting forest canopies,
green eyes glittering and always
tittering away about faeries.
She spent her days all alone, bare feet
weaving through sawgrass, and catching
red dragonflies by the creek.
With her feet, she spent tracing the stars' path onto
a field of sunflowers,
or petunias or something like that.
One day I followed her and she notised,
she always notised everything,
but she wouldn't say a word
or look my way
lest she scare off this mantis praying upon her palms.
And she would let her hours slip away
standing in a golden field,
grass and dress brushing against her calves,
face turned towards the birds
no doubt waiting for faeries.
I approached her one day, while
she was standing in a fi
I have no idea what to write for this person .3.
That's about it for the winners. So thank you very much for favouriting my work and I hope you all will continue to do so ^^
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-Captain Chen of the Black fedora Pirates