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The Avatar State

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The Avatar State:

Just as there are four elements
Existing in harmony with one another
So too are there four states of poetry:

[Air:]
Air is the element of freedom
Exemplified by the use of free verse
It has no structure and no true shape
But allows us creative control

Through the use of air as a poetic medium
We allow our emotions a freedom to be
We allow them to soar upon worded wings
Gliding freely through the skies of literature

[Water:]
Water is the element of the changing flow
It can be hard as ice or as soft as snow.
Its nature resembles the power of rhyme
Which grants us order and a structured mind

By pushing and pulling the words we may-
create a picture of what we wish to say
Painted upon a canvas of emotional lines
We create a sculpture of structured rhymes

[Earth:]
Earth is uncomprising
Craggy on the whole, it resembles the concrete
Poetic soul
Like the craggy mountains with peaks and valleys
It can take us down
A creative alley. For rock resembles-
A stoic man, unmoving by nature
he is destiny's hand. He holds to his beliefs
Indifferent to emotion, for he is the land
Surrounded by an ocean.

[Fire:]
Fire is the last of the four elements
But it is the most difficult of all to portray
For in order to display it I must write in song
And that cannot be done today...

[Avatar:]
And so I leave you now, with the knowledge of four
But I hope you've enjoyed the taste of this lore
I hope to display in these coming weeks
That I've learnt and mastered all and each.

"For I am Avatar Chen, the last Word-Bender"

-Chen Yuan Wen, 19th June 2012
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AUTHOR'S COMMENT:
Okay, first things first, this is a warm-up piece for Real Week.

This whole week, in order to deal with the theme, I will need to use many different styles of poetry to accurately convey the emotions I want to create. Therefore I thought it best to establish a base first.

Now some of the people who previewed this before release noted that Earth and Fire also have a rhyme scheme. Reason being, Earth is concrete poetry which focuses on the shape of the poem (rhyme or no rhyme is up to you). Fire is not accurately portrayed. I will do a proper fire one during the week, because rather than give a preview of the fire style I would prefer to just bring it out in an Agni KAI!

Anywho, enjoy :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Very well written and it flows beautifully. The transitions between the starting and ending of the elements could use a little more time but nothing major. Your air and water elements were by far the best in my opinion with their great imagery that really hooks the reader.

Though your fire was a little disapointing compared to the rest of how great they are. I am not trying to insult but I wish that you spent more time on fire. Since you've based these on Avatar: Last Airbender I'd assume that it would be from a Master Fire Bender's view as the others. I'd advice you to go into more description of Jeong Jeong's opinion of it being a curse. Consuming of all at a harsh note compared to others. It is the most hated element in the series.

Besides the fire stanza it was brilliantly written with much though and heart poored into it. You should be proud of this piece. Plus the amazing way you involved another, you as the speaker play as someone of another name. That is all and have a nice day.