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I Know You Hate Me Now But...

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I Know You Hate Me Now But...:


Just give me a chance alright, I'll explain

To me, you're the girl that I notice everything about.

The way you laugh, the way you smile;

We got along great back then, even if we don't now.

And to be honest, I miss that...

You had the most lovely silky smooth hair

You'd give me the cutest anime girl smile

I wish I'd talked to you more about Manga,

Hell you got me started on the whole thing.

You were fantastic at drawing too

Man I was always jealous of that talent,

And I loved your drawings, like I once loved you.

I wish that you could have been a professional.

I would have bought your book every month y'know...

You encouraged me to write.

Back when my stories were shit,

Back when my poems were still baby's rhymes.

You taught me not to give in and I was grateful.

Now just let me finish alright?

I know that you won't speak to me.

That's okay, I admit to being an ass,

But the reason that I'm writing this poem to nobody,

Is because I want you to remember why I loved you;

I want you to recall that girl and think fondly of her,

Because once upon a time, I loved her the most...




-Chen Yuan Wen, 5th January 2012
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Author's Comment:

Arrr maties,

Now, everyone knows that Pirates have - though I do be afraid t' use th' term as such - swag and due t' this swag we do attract a lot of members of the opposite gender.

O' course, before some of us became pirates - well - we were bloody awkward tiny asian kids who were slightly on the chubby side with a bad haircut.

Thinkin' back t' those days I recalled a very bittersweet experience. That is what I sought t' put inta words and o' course the lingo fits th' time. The poem is best read in an URBAN accent, similar to that o' me urban teddy (click me youtube link if ye ain't seen 'em yet).

I admit, I should have been more mature about things with her, but I certainly have no regrets. Wherever she be, whatever she be doin' may the winds be at her back as they are at mine.

So tell me ye scurvy lot...what about yer tales o' romance eh? I'd love t' hear some.

*Now that that's all done with, shameless pirate self-promotion time*

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I love this poem. I also think that can be for not only boy and girl or other romantic relationship , but for just for relationship or friendship .
It seems the autor regrets for something did wrongly , but also is greatful for this relation. I like that the poem is to nobody. This way it can touch everybody . It touched me. I also liked the different font of words.
It is nice way to say that what was before. I like filling of greAtful, I was stupid, I was ass, but now I see what happend after, I understood that I had had something adoreble and wont to say thank you. I lost you but I still have my best fillings.