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Get your Game Face ON!

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I hear you bring up the rookies; The grade-A talent!
They're whooping my ass like it's a beauty pageant.
Their words are so sharp, I feel it's armageddon.
But they have missed out on one crucial lesson...

You see I get dirty when I'm bringing the storm,
Like tell me if this rag smells of chloroform?
And while you're knocked out, I will be dropping an essay,
On what you need to learn, if you want to be 'mainstay'!

Or maybe you'll remain another one-trick pony;
With every verse sounding like a two-bit phony.
You won't impress me and it's no use hiding.
I'm known to be like Jack Nicholson from the Shining!

So here comes Johnny! An axe for you though,
Because you're tired and your work is so cold.
You need to polish up on your free verse,
Before my acid rap, puts you in a hearse!



-Chennie, 27th May 2014

If you liked it, don't forget to fave it! It's the only way I'll know! (>3<)/

P.S. Listen to the Audio on my soundcloud: soundcloud.com/siddhartha-chen…

Alright,

So here's the first official rap piece. Audio included, sorry there's no music, I'm musically retarded so yeaaaah.

Anyway it's just a bit of humour, I hope you enjoy it and it was based off this AMAZING piece done by :iconcjpolodo:

Here's the link: fav.me/d7j98wk

He wrote it in response to the mini-challenge in "My Name Is" and I think he did a great job, it inspired me to write my own version of it :'3

Tell me what you think yeah?

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:


Mini-Challenge (No rules, just mention me/link me so I can see it, challenge open to EVERYONE):

Alright alright here's a TWO-SIDED mini-challenge tonight!

Veterans - If you've been on DA more than a year, you're a veteran so write something to school all them newbies!

Rookie - If you've been on DA for less than a year, you're a rookie, so write something that'll blow those vets to pieces.

Let the creativity flow people :'3

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Chaotic-Jester-21's avatar
I love this X3
I also love how you used some Hollywood Undead o3o *justsohappenstobemyfavoriteband*