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You Can't Stop Me:

Cold, I'm sittin' here,
You see me cut the lights out
Stains on the inside;
I'm tired of being wiped out.

Cleaned, like the stone weathered down in the rain,
You wore me down to my core; now let me bring on the pain!

Uh-huh, now let me turn it slow for you all
Uh-huh, I'm grabbin' at the stars till they fall
Uh-huh, I'm never gonna die; I stand tall
Uh-huh, I'm breakin' through this fuckin' brick wall.

You know, that I will be the voice in your mind.
You know, that it will be the lyrical kind
You see, the way I put my words into rhyme
If I was rapping out of rhythm, man this would be a crime.

So hear, my voice and I will make you believe
That I, still have a few tricks up my sleeve.
I'm not, a criminal with a disease
So let me hear you once more, let me make you believe

Uh-huh, I'm turnin' it slow for you all
Uh-huh, I'm grabbin' at the stars till they fall
Uh-huh, I'm never gonna die; I stand tall
Uh-huh, I'm breakin' through this fuckin' brick wall.

Uh-huh, you know I turn it slow for you all
Uh-huh, I'm grabbin' at the stars till they fall
Uh-huh, I'm never gonna die; I stand tall
I'm a crazy mad rapper and I am breakin' the wall!

"So what have you done recently?"
  
-Chen Yuan Wen, 8th March 2012
FAVING/COMMENTING:
Hey there. Please feel free to fave and comment. You will be thanked (if a little late) and each one helps me in my career ^^

PERSONAL MESSAGE:

Arrr mateys, ye've gone without a release fer awhile and so, here is my next one. Once again I be practisin' my rhythm and rap flows for the big release in 2 weeks and I'm also testing the urban category out.

If you haven't already heard, I will be collaborating with artist :iconwaitingendlessly: in a very urban mix of poetry that deals with a multitude of issues.

Hope ye all enjoy ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:

OTHER POEMS BY ME:
Struggling at Life -[link]
I Am So Disturbed - [link]
Sweet Bird in A Cage - [link]
Bullies in the Hall - [link]
The Walk of Utter Shame - [link]
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PostWaveCore Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
You don't get hip hop, do you?
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Professional Writer
Who knows, if you don't feel I get it, then that's your opinion ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
:D (very sensitive to crude words lol) :icontearplz:

but anyway, pardon me, i don't use vulgarities >< ANYYYYYYWWWWAAAAAAAAYYyY

i like it (of course, its the captain, about the proof thing, i think i will take a long time, argh why exams and traditional media, y u take so long a :icontearplz:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr haha, take your time with the proof ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconjackfireplz:
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012
thanks [stares sparkly eyed]
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Haha, nice eyes :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
[glittery eyes] turns to [blinding eyes]
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Professional Writer
LOL nice :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
and the alien eyes become a light source
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InuskiXD Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool , really liked this ^^ xD
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