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You Can't Stop Me:

Cold, I'm sittin' here,
You see me cut the lights out
Stains on the inside;
I'm tired of being wiped out.

Cleaned, like the stone weathered down in the rain,
You wore me down to my core; now let me bring on the pain!

Uh-huh, now let me turn it slow for you all
Uh-huh, I'm grabbin' at the stars till they fall
Uh-huh, I'm never gonna die; I stand tall
Uh-huh, I'm breakin' through this fuckin' brick wall.

You know, that I will be the voice in your mind.
You know, that it will be the lyrical kind
You see, the way I put my words into rhyme
If I was rapping out of rhythm, man this would be a crime.

So hear, my voice and I will make you believe
That I, still have a few tricks up my sleeve.
I'm not, a criminal with a disease
So let me hear you once more, let me make you believe

Uh-huh, I'm turnin' it slow for you all
Uh-huh, I'm grabbin' at the stars till they fall
Uh-huh, I'm never gonna die; I stand tall
Uh-huh, I'm breakin' through this fuckin' brick wall.

Uh-huh, you know I turn it slow for you all
Uh-huh, I'm grabbin' at the stars till they fall
Uh-huh, I'm never gonna die; I stand tall
I'm a crazy mad rapper and I am breakin' the wall!

"So what have you done recently?"
  
-Chen Yuan Wen, 8th March 2012
FAVING/COMMENTING:
Hey there. Please feel free to fave and comment. You will be thanked (if a little late) and each one helps me in my career ^^

PERSONAL MESSAGE:

Arrr mateys, ye've gone without a release fer awhile and so, here is my next one. Once again I be practisin' my rhythm and rap flows for the big release in 2 weeks and I'm also testing the urban category out.

If you haven't already heard, I will be collaborating with artist :iconwaitingendlessly: in a very urban mix of poetry that deals with a multitude of issues.

Hope ye all enjoy ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:

OTHER POEMS BY ME:
Struggling at Life -[link]
I Am So Disturbed - [link]
Sweet Bird in A Cage - [link]
Bullies in the Hall - [link]
The Walk of Utter Shame - [link]
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PostWaveCore Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
You don't get hip hop, do you?
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Professional Writer
Who knows, if you don't feel I get it, then that's your opinion ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
:D (very sensitive to crude words lol) :icontearplz:

but anyway, pardon me, i don't use vulgarities >< ANYYYYYYWWWWAAAAAAAAYYyY

i like it (of course, its the captain, about the proof thing, i think i will take a long time, argh why exams and traditional media, y u take so long a :icontearplz:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr haha, take your time with the proof ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconjackfireplz:
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012
thanks [stares sparkly eyed]
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Haha, nice eyes :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
[glittery eyes] turns to [blinding eyes]
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Professional Writer
LOL nice :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
and the alien eyes become a light source
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InuskiXD Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool , really liked this ^^ xD
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks Ina ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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FlyAway-555 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice! It stumbled along for the first little bit, I wasn't too sure which beat you were following, but by the third stanza, It was flowing nicely.
Keep up the great work!!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr actually, if you read through the comments, those who are familiar with rap will rap it out perfectly. That's because there is no stumble. Anyone who understands the basic flow of rap will be able to pick it up after the first two lines.

That said, those who are reading it as poetry will find it stumbling. It was classified as urban for a reason. The beat is very easy to pick up Emma =P

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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FlyAway-555 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah... I read it as poetry, not rap.. I can't rap for chopsticks..
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Professional Writer
S'alright, doesn't bother me :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
Omg u wrote this! I love rap and this is amazing I thought a professional wrote this NO joke
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr thank ye, I'm very glad that ye enjoyed it ^^

Please feel free ta share it out if ye like it enough :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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dyronl Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012   Writer
A bit short, I feel like there's another verse right there, but that in and of itself is a good thing, nice work
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr thank ye so kindly fer readin' this my friend ^^

I hope my updates this week will continue to satisfy you :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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WeepingAngel1953 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Never give up!!!!!Or give in to the evils that try to put you down.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr that would be about right ^^

Thank you for enjoying my work :3

If you liked it enough, drop a share =D

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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klevry1 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love this rap, feels smooth and strong, well done ^^
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrrr thank ye so much fer enjoyin' it Olivia ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconpoliticsplz:
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animegrl7979 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
it rhymed well i just personally did not like it that much
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
That's alright, I hope ye like the darker piece I'm putting out tonight :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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Kinexuru Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aye, this is one of the urban kind of feel. :D I like how Captain makes every word rhyme. =D
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr thank ye Ai :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
cool
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr thank ye, glad ye liked it ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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jessdel Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This has a great urban feel!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr thank ye so kindly ^^. Drop me a share if ya want ta assist me :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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chakramqueenCMS Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
Crazy mad rapper indeed. :XD:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr thank ye Cara, glad ye liked it :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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chakramqueenCMS Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Well tis certainly ye, mate. :XD:
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AisuruTheWolf1 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
I don't know what it is, but when I read your poetry, it reminds me of something. This is good, I think.

This one reminded me of a game called "Jet Set Radio Future" for the Xbox. This song sounds like it could be used, based on the tune I gave it.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr xD. Glad ta know it has such usefulness ^^

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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BHSBlueHairedSaiyan Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
FUCK YEAH! Now I wanna see how good you'll be if you wrote your own original raps...epicness ;P
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Professional Writer
This is original xD

I wrote this myself last night =P

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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BHSBlueHairedSaiyan Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's mighty fine then Cap'n! Someone should rap this!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Professional Writer
I could do it myself, but someone would have to design the best, that's all xD

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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BHSBlueHairedSaiyan Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well if you ever do rap it and put it up on YouTube, I'll definitely be one of the first!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
There is a link to my youtube in the signature, but the current raps I do are pretty amateur :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconjackfireplz:
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BHSBlueHairedSaiyan Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pish-posh! I have no doubt in my mind that they're great! Oh, and I have made a poem btw, but it was just out of anger, so it might not be good...:blush:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr link me lass, I'd love ta see :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconjackfireplz:
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TwiUnderSeeker Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
This is really good. Great job.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr thank ye ^^, if ya enjoyed me rhythm, please feel free to share it out =D

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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TwiUnderSeeker Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
Thanks.
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supahSTARZ Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Artist
is this a song or a poem?
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Professional Writer
Both xD. It could be a song, but I can't perform it without someone to make the beat xD

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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