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Winterfall:

Warm blood drips upon the pearl white snow
freezing into droplets that shine and glow
Red like the colour of his once livid cheeks
It frames the sculpture I have carved on this peak

An artwork made so terrifyingly sublime
I believe that such a thing would be condemned as a crime
But woe betide the unfortunate soul
For the poor man stumbled into the freezing cold...

I remember his features in his moment of death
Hope and despair, intermingled as one
A shine of reality as he opens the door
and steps into the hell from the days of yore

From then he has passed into my loving care
His body as a shell and so I lay it bare
I paint it with colours, to frame the moment of death
and lay it with the others in the mountain's breast

Here in the silence, within the womb of the earth
You can view the masterpiece that I have birthed
A giant of corpses, sewn with flesh
Tattooed with the faces of eternal rest...

"Ah, indeed I am a genius..."

-Chen Yuan Wen, 23rd August 2012
Fer those o' ye who don't know yet. Chen is workin' tirelessly inbetween his studies t' come up with new stories an' new techniques fer writin' poetry.

Bein' a writer is his dream an' so I hope ye'll all enjoy this new piece that he's produced. It's a revisit o' his old rhyming style with a slightly different arrangement in structure.

Let us know how it was received ^^ Yer comments will make him work much harder :3

-Co-captain Hayes :iconlugialuvr13:
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:iconphoenixofwinterfell:
PhoenixOfWinterfell Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Writer
Amazing! Wow, you're such an incredible poet! I'll end up faving all your gallery...
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ShadowsInOurMemories Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
This shit.. I like it.
Sounds creepy and fun.
Job well done.^^
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Myennaius13 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
This sounds like a necromancer living in a mountain and building some kind of monster out of people who've died there.
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noorelven Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
stop it dr frankenstein version 4 :P
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:icontwiunderseeker:
TwiUnderSeeker Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
Another Great.
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PopCornSalt Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hwooa!! So cool! :O
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:iconxyvette:
xyvette Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
And yesh indeed. Of courz yar a genius. *thumbs up~*
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DawnOfThyEmbrace Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Student Writer
Oh my , you are such a talented poet , I admire very much the way you are able to envolve the writer in your poetry and it is so great your poetry :) :hug: :D

And if you like check out my gallery :gallery: when you have the time and leave a comment , thanks and keep up the good work !
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spiritguideofthewolf Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
You are such a good writer :) I hope to one day have even an ounce of your skill
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Amaya2278 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This sounds like a Nightwish song, reminds me a little of Cadence of Her Last Breath by them off their album Dark Passion Play. It's really good, very creepy, but good :)
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
yuezz a geniuz indeed
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augumon05 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
i think he could take a little break from writing here and relax a little.
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reflectionsinwater Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is very nice. :D :D. The structure of describing the same image but with different interpretations can be quite good if done well (which in this case, it damn is XD). I'm sort of confused by the flow. Each stanza on its own can stand by itself as a separate, very well done image (I love the 3rd stanza, it just feels so inter-connected) ;), though I don't get the flow. Can you explain a bit more? It would make this amazing poem even more astounding :D if you could.
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kedonsine Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah! Indeed, You Are A Genius
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PostWaveCore Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
WordofChen! Take a shot!
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:iconcrysanthemum963:
crysanthemum963 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
Dude, this is one creepy poem, but I love the rhyming scheme :).
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:iconmoonlight-m3lody:
Moonlight-M3lody Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's so enchanting... and haunting.
Reminds me of the fairytale 'Snow Queen' and 'How Edelweiss Came to Be'.
Simply beautiful.
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful imagery
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LadySparrow01 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Student General Artist
This piece is very discriptive. I really like how it seems to be open to interpretation.
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20Tourniquet02 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
Macabre but great!:)
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Zephyras-Lied Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Amazing poem :)
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SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012   General Artist
very clear imagery~ I like it ^_^
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Geobukseon Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Student Writer
Reminds me of all the epics fails I had playing skyrim.

I might just change my name to 'winterfall' too.
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Copperfrost Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Pfft I know right? XD
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:icongeobukseon:
Geobukseon Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Writer
Yeah. For Ulfric!
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:iconcopperfrost:
Copperfrost Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Yup, definitely :3
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Wiipodgirl Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy crap, this is beautiful.
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donttuchme Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
right on your back
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
He's back! :D
It's good :thumbsup:
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