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Winterfall:

Warm blood drips upon the pearl white snow
freezing into droplets that shine and glow
Red like the colour of his once livid cheeks
It frames the sculpture I have carved on this peak

An artwork made so terrifyingly sublime
I believe that such a thing would be condemned as a crime
But woe betide the unfortunate soul
For the poor man stumbled into the freezing cold...

I remember his features in his moment of death
Hope and despair, intermingled as one
A shine of reality as he opens the door
and steps into the hell from the days of yore

From then he has passed into my loving care
His body as a shell and so I lay it bare
I paint it with colours, to frame the moment of death
and lay it with the others in the mountain's breast

Here in the silence, within the womb of the earth
You can view the masterpiece that I have birthed
A giant of corpses, sewn with flesh
Tattooed with the faces of eternal rest...

"Ah, indeed I am a genius..."

-Chen Yuan Wen, 23rd August 2012
Fer those o' ye who don't know yet. Chen is workin' tirelessly inbetween his studies t' come up with new stories an' new techniques fer writin' poetry.

Bein' a writer is his dream an' so I hope ye'll all enjoy this new piece that he's produced. It's a revisit o' his old rhyming style with a slightly different arrangement in structure.

Let us know how it was received ^^ Yer comments will make him work much harder :3

-Co-captain Hayes :iconlugialuvr13:
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:iconphoenixofwinterfell:
Amazing! Wow, you're such an incredible poet! I'll end up faving all your gallery...
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ShadowsInOurMemories Oct 19, 2012
This shit.. I like it.
Sounds creepy and fun.
Job well done.^^
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:iconmyennaius13:
This sounds like a necromancer living in a mountain and building some kind of monster out of people who've died there.
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:iconnoorelven:
stop it dr frankenstein version 4 :P
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PopCornSalt Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hwooa!! So cool! :O
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:iconxyvette:
And yesh indeed. Of courz yar a genius. *thumbs up~*
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DawnOfThyEmbrace Aug 29, 2012  Student Writer
Oh my , you are such a talented poet , I admire very much the way you are able to envolve the writer in your poetry and it is so great your poetry :) :hug: :D

And if you like check out my gallery :gallery: when you have the time and leave a comment , thanks and keep up the good work !
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spiritguideofthewolf Aug 28, 2012
You are such a good writer :) I hope to one day have even an ounce of your skill
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Amaya2278 Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This sounds like a Nightwish song, reminds me a little of Cadence of Her Last Breath by them off their album Dark Passion Play. It's really good, very creepy, but good :)
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