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Wings of Despair:

A momentary glance toward the birds in the sky;
Makes me feel like I am soaring; with a hope to fly.
But the chilling winds that wrap me, reflect the cold of this day
And the icy frost that batters me, chips me away...

It drains the very breath from me, as though the ice is locked within
I feel my hope is fading again; like a jar of captured wind...
Where once my will was strong and boundless; now it sits on broken wastes
I must admit this crushing despair, it feels as bad as it tastes....

From the moment that I acquired them, these were ugly tattered wings
They were made from my despair, and bound in bitter strings....
Like permanent fixtures, of sorrows and tears;
They are laced with poison, and embedded fears....

On the edge of my sanity, I hear the voices keening;
These are lives that are lost while the creature is breathing...
It's a snippet of darkness, a shard of me!
A hidden part that you will never see...

Because in birth I was twisted, broken and wrong
I knew I was a creature from the day I was born...
But your eyes were stapled, and shut to the truth!
Why didn't you stop me, when you saw the proof?

When I woke up screaming, knife in hand;
You hid me away, beneath the land...
In the darkness I grew, untamed and wild;
Now the beast inside, is horrid and vile.

But release me now and I may leave you breathing;
Although you might be, heavily bleeding...
The devil has gifted this madness to me;
And now the end can justify the means you see?

"What a perfect descent, into abject madness..."

-Chen Yuan Wen and Zoe Hayes, 7th May 2012
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- was inspired by this poem ^^

AUTHOR'S COMMENT:

Alright, here is a the release tonight, titled "Wings of Despair". It was co-written and proof-read by my co-captain Hayes. Hopefully it will prove good enough for you all to enjoy :3

Anyway I used 2 songs to inspire this, one is easier to pick out since it has more references but the other one was just one phrase.

If you guess both, I'll give dedz (dedications) in my poem to those people [your icon will be displayed here in the author's comments section]. If there aren't enough people getting both right, I may include people who just get 1 of the songs correct.

Hint: 1st Band - Masks. 2nd Band - The vocalist has some pretty unique growls and a unique piercing that hangs over his chin.

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

OTHER POEMS BY ME:

The Feelings That Linger - [link]
The Lie of Vengeance - [link]
The Farseer - [link]
The Sadist - [link]
Hunting the Witch - [link]
The Witch Hunter - [link]

OTHER LITERATURE BY ME:

Knight Run 2 - [link]
Knight Run- [link]
SANGUINE Chapter 1 - 1 - [link]
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~Irene-B Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing. I like the way there are some parts of the poem where you like to emphasise with italics, it gives another layer of meaning to the stance.
This poem was an inspiration to my sketch 'The Dark Angel in the Light': [link]
I really like these types of poems that you do. :D
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*WordOfChen Jan 12, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye so kindly, I hope ye love a lot more ^^ Plenty t' see in me gallery and more comin' out each day ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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~Irene-B Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Definitely. I think that this poem is one of my most favourites at the moment, there's something bittersweet and dark about it that really brings out an emotion from it. I feel almost as though I can relate to it. Love the way you always write in different POVs.
Now I'll be off scanning through and favouriting most of your gallery. :D
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*WordOfChen Feb 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Haha thank you ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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i cant guess (i rarely listen to some types of music)<-- i dont know what hehe i listen to sweet happy music
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*WordOfChen Jun 21, 2012  Professional Writer
haha I do believe this one was Disturbed and Slipknot ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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ahaha after YouTube, i know why i don't know who they are. the genres are far
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now i am awkward. who are they, NEVER MIND YouTube is men's best friend
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like a jar of captured wind...
Sounds so fragile...
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*WordOfChen May 25, 2012  Professional Writer
Aye, it is indeed fragile ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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