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Undying

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Undying:

How many days do you spend now, putting me down?
The coffin call for a dead man waiting around
"He's just an underground laughing stock, never to rise"
But on the seventh day I'm coming back; these are my ties!

The kind of promise that you made with the devil inside
You try to take away my soul, but I take it in stride
I ain't a doll that is crushed by the weight of his pride
I am the real and the raw of the things you denied!

You're playing snake games, selling oil, pass it off strong
You're just a pot head, weed dead, smoking your bong.

You try to look away, play and hide; apathy's best
But I'm the kind of bad boy you don't put to the test!





-Chen Yuan Wen, 7th February 2013
So yesterday DA shuffled my work...don't know why, but it kinda sucks that it's happening again. Anyway, I used to get mad but this time I'm like whatever I'll just use it as more writing material. Hopefully they won't shuffle this piece, but if they do, oh well.

It seems that they're always doing it whenever I'm starting something. Like yesterday, I was trying to advertise my shot-glass poetry style which I'm using for my second book '50 Little Glasses'. If you'd like an example, check this out: [link]

Anyway, about tonight's piece. It was written from an old experience back in school, sort of a rapid-fire rap really. I remember this one pot-head who used to think he was cool because he smoked, but honestly the cool smokers are the ones that don't brag about it like it's a top priority. Got nothing against the people that partake but this douche was just =__=. Anyhow used it as a model for this piece so I can show that no matter how much they shuffle me (or no matter how much that douche put me down) I'm cool in my own way and the more you oppress me, the more I'll rise ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

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I couldn't help myself, but as I was reading this, I ended up reading the words to a certain rhythm, like rap, basically. That's the power of poetry, kids.

I like this piece, but it seems kind of vague. And generic, I should add. No offense, Captain, but it seems that your works are starting to slide; it doesn't seem to the same effect that your previous works had.

I do the message to heart, however. There are many people out there who have the talent for what they love, but a lot of people realize that the person in question is better than themselves, so they belittle them. Yet we rise above it all; making a name for ourselves and proving those our adversaries wrong.

Great job on getting the message through.