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They Watch You Sleep:

There are many bards who can tell you tales
Of the creeping shadows that come at night
We've seen them crawling along the walls
In the absence of the light...

On the darkest of nights, cold and chill
You can hear them quietly gibbering.
They speak of things that you cannot know
Which is why they are always whispering.

It is said that they will know the future
and that they know the fate of every man
They are here to watch his path unfold
or perhaps to have him damned...

These sick and twisted animals
Bear a stench that is rather foul
But you will only smell this scent
if they choose to remove their cowl

It is said that their eyes are like obsidian doorways;
Which hold the key to the depths of the mind.
But none have the courage to look within them;
Afraid of what they'll find...

So my only advice to the weary traveller
Is to believe in the safety of the tavern
Do not look toward the darkest of corners
or you might just stir their cavern...

"Ladies and gentlemen, I trust you will sleep well tonight."

-Chen Yuan Wen, 26th May 2012
:iconwordofchen:
AUTHOR'S COMMENT:

Arrr maties, I decided ta do a more bard-like tale tonight. Dark as it is, many folk were entertained by frightenin' legends and stories and so I came up with this one. Imagine a poor traveller goin' alone and listenin' to a story like this in a tavern. Not fun I say xD.

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

OTHER POEMS BY ME:

Blood Crusade - [link]
The Secret of the Trees - [link]
Dragon Blood - [link]
The Great Drake - [link]
Rest My Sweetest Darling - [link]
Fear the Dragon Call - [link]

OTHER LITERATURE BY ME:

Knight Run 2 - [link]
Knight Run- [link]
SANGUINE Chapter 1 - 1 - [link]
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:icongetsuei-san:
~Getsuei-san Jul 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
When I saw the title I thought of stalkers, but this seems a little eerier...
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:iconafroasiangypsygirl:
Mood: Love ~afroasiangypsygirl Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is good. It's short and straight to the point. I imagine shadow people while reading this. Liking the hint of mystery to it.
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:icondarkzelda15:
~DarkZelda15 Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, you can relate it to a ghost story I guess, that might make it more fun...though I'd probably be scared senseless if a bard read this to me in a creepy voice, then just says the last line normally and walk away. Anyway, love it as always, can't wait for more!
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:iconpagan-moon-dreamer:
Mood: Wow! ~Pagan-Moon-Dreamer Jun 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Have you been watching Supernatural, so did you just find out about Domovios?

It this is on Domovios then I really like it but know that not all Domotios are bad really there are more good ones then there are bad.
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:iconcrypticcuriousity:
I love the eerie fantasy-like imagery!
But I was going to bed soon...now....
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:icontheblacksmith:
Wow... imagery. :thumbsup:
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:iconnoorelven:
Myrdraal would be welcome :D (ref Wheel of Time series)
I can almost see a poem about them forming in your head ! xD :P

This is amazing... I would give a lot to learn from these beasts the method of mastery over human emotions !
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:iconkedonsine:
Mood: Fear ~kedonsine May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
they watch me sleep?[link]
Good thing I don't sleep
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:icontoska9:
This is very nice and in keeping with your stated theme!
Well done.
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:iconmyennaius13:
Interesting, and leaves the mind to ponder on whatever the source of the legend could be.
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