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These Tears Would Come:



If my tears could tell a story of two -

What would they have to say about you?

Of a boy who spent his whole life seeking

And a girl who found it in the arms of another…

Would they tell us of laughter? Beneath a starlit sky,

Or of harsh words exchanged on bitter nights.

Would they speak of moments, so beautifully captured;

To be enjoyed in memory, like a perfect wine.

Or perhaps they would tell us of an untampered truth:

Of the lonely nights spent longing, for an Eden lost.

Captivated, habituated, to this lonely habit of you;

For her alone, these tears would come.



-Chen Yuan Wen, 31st march 2013
Ladies and Gents,

Happy Easter, I hope you're having fun so far.

I'll be posting a journal update tomorrow morning, since I've been so busy recently, but for today enjoy this sorrowful romance piece ^^.

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I felt that I ought to show, due to my recent slew of work, that I am not limited solely to dark topics. I prefer them, but romance is just as easy (especially if its sad).

After all, I'm sure we all have those people whom we find to be our 'habits'

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Alright mates,
Been another long break due to all this job searching stuff and quite frankly I've got more of that coming up next week, but this week is the last round of applications and therefore it'll be more about the interviews and such in the days to come. Hence I should have a little bit more time for writing, as and when I can at least ^^.
THAT SAID, TONIGHT I SHALL BE RELEASING SOMETHING NEW FOR ALL OF YOU! ORAAAA!
In addition to that this week, I'm hoping to release the first part of 'Live With Me', my first attempt at a sci-fi story. As well as a few poems I've written while being on the break.
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:iconyaminekoyami:
yaminekoyami Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
I love it ~!
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IAstartov Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
Great work, like it!
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:iconxyvette:
xyvette Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
i used to used to have that for him. But BLEHHH no more!
by the way, nice work! Love it! is beautiful ~
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sleepy-kisses Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful.
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augumon05 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
for me, it is the second, as my life has been thus. Not to care, but wish to be cared about, to want to spend time with that person but never figuring out who that person exactly is. So as long as i spend by myself, that one is never to be bestowed upon me.
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passionatepremise Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Student General Artist
:tighthug:
This describes exactly what I'm going through... :heart: <3
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CzeladniK09 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no tears, please, its a waste of good suffering :evillaugh:
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:iconoraclespeaker:
Oraclespeaker Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Student General Artist
This is just.... so beautifully perfect
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:iconcygam-7:
Cygam-7 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013   Traditional Artist
Beautiful
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:icongilpires:
GilPires Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
THUMBS UP!
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:iconteto-the-poteto:
Teto-the-Poteto Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow... That's so beautiful and sad.. ;3;
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:iconmanxiety:
manxiety Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
Beautiful work.
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:iconmarmodre:
Marmodre Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
Tnaaww... that made me 'tnaww' even if I'm in a wildfire mood.
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MuccNoMiya Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
I like it ,i want cry:iconlazycryplz:
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:iconlynchkidme:
lynchkidme Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL TO READ, LOVED IT
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:iconyellowribonsky:
yellowribonsky Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student General Artist
very beatiful. it is very deep filled with alot of emotion
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:iconnartim:
nartim Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student General Artist
You're pretty good at this style as well! I think we can all relate to something like this...
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:icongraveyardancing45:
graveyardancing45 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I swear if you published a poem book I'd buy it.
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:iconthisisntadream:
thisisntadream Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
This is seriously beautiful, you have such talent.
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:icondawnofspirit:
dawnofspirit Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
shit! this is crazy beautiful hand writing.
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:iconcandyzombielord:
candyzombielord Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
amazing work captain Chen
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candyzombielord Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i also bought the recording to.
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:iconmcguiverstein:
mcguiverstein Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Amazing how this sums up my life right now.. My girlfriend of three years and I and I just broke up two weeks ago in probably the worst way possible. It's been really rough.. Thank you for writing this. You truly are a poet
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LimitlessAsSky Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Filmographer
This really captures the emotions, and in so few a words too. Very well written.
I will be keeping an eye on more of your stuff for sure.
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thelonelywolf678 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Writer
You are seriously one of the best writters ive seen in a long time! Keep up the amazing work! :D
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:iconcrysanthemum963:
crysanthemum963 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
This is so romantically sad~ :clap:
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:iconmichael-j-hawk:
Michael-J-Hawk Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You've done an excellent job as always, cap'n! :D
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:iconmiyu713:
miyu713 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great job as always! :)
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:iconrainpathlovesartemis:
This is so beautiful and sickly true to reality, it's perfect.
I especally enjoy how the poem reflects either a story teller or the reader, with I's and me's. Amazing job, and another successful poem.
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:iconstarmic:
starmic Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
beautifulll!
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:iconrainpathlovesartemis:
This was so beautiful.
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:iconangelgirlartist:
angelgirlartist Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow...
(That's the best I have right now)
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful and heartbreaking <3
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:iconphoenixofwinterfell:
PhoenixOfWinterfell Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Writer
This is an incredible poem! I hope I could do something like that too... Anyway! Great job~ :D
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:iconmaemi-sedai:
Maemi-Sedai Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You manage to amaze me with every poem you write! 'Tis beautifully melancholic! Well done! :iconomgsocuteplz:
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Wiipodgirl Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*starts clapping*
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