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These Hands Are So Red...

These hands are now red and so slicked with this blood,

I can't even wash it in a basin of mud...

As I scrape at the skin of those demons I chase,

I am left with a smile mixed with pain on my face.

Since I swore I would savour this blatant disgrace,

Let perversion be writ in these scars I will trace.

From the tip of my shoulders to the base of my tongue,

Are the names of those sleepers so cold and so young...


-Chen Yuan Wen, 15th March 2013
Seeing that there is not much lit now on DA saddens me, so I decided to post a nice little sadistic piece to entertain you all. What do you think its about my dear readers?

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SimpleBend Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist
Nice rhyming. Good metaphors.
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noorelven Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
*dances in the darkness that is chen :D*
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
Great!
The rhyming was fantastic, such good flow and I like the darkness of it all ! x
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly for enjoying it ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Dawni42 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Student Writer
I have read two pieces of your work and have decided we are kindred spirits. I love the sadistic nature of your literature and the way they twist and weave in my mind. For lack of a better word, very intoxicating.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
I'm glad that you enjoy my works. Hopefully my lighter pieces will also entertain you ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Dawni42 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Student Writer
I will definitely look ^^ they are bound to all be just as transfixing as this
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authorofthings Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
this is nice haha
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Thanks so kindly for enjoying it :3

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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1Bluefur Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like it! The rhyme scheme is solid and for the most part makes sense.

Though I don't really understand the basin of mud bit, is there a meaning to it or did you just want to keep the rhyme scheme?
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