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August 12, 2013
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Ah my dear, how are you feeling?
Not too uncomfortable I hope...

You see, you are another,
Lucky individual.
A wondrous being, handpicked by me,
For you are perfect.

Now then,

Before you start screaming,
Before all that noise and unpleasantry befouls these soft red lips.
I've taken the liberty of removing your tongue...

Wag, wag, wag;
That's all it was doing when I extracted it.
Like some, infectious insect

But oh, I shouldn't raise my voice.
That's not very proper of me, hehe.

Now, let's put some markings on you.

Mmm - I'm going to have to get rid of all this, excess.
You see, I can't have a toy that's all bulging in the wrong places.
Dolls are slim, dolls are pretty.
So no, we can't have that...

We'll just slowly slide this tiny slip of metal.
Shlip, shlop, shlip, shlop - and pull!
You see, you see?
It comes right off, like a layer of yellow and red.

Ugh, it's all oily and slick. Yuck!

But, after we're done
We can't have you getting infected can we?
So I'm going to get a little of, daddy's drink.
And we'll pour it all over, to make the bad bugs go away...

Ah, ah, ah, ah, control yourself.
Just because you're awake now doesn't mean you can move.
If you do, it'll tear apart all the other stitches.
But don't worry, they'll be hidden when I put you in a lovely dress.

Now, would you be ever so kind my dear,
And lean your beautiful head back.
I've got to remove those nasty bulbs of yours,
And replace them with these lovely round eyes.

Hee, cross my heart and hope to die.
Stick the plier in their eye! <3
Commissioned piece for :iconkerrinox: - Thank you so much for giving me this opportunity (^_^)/

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8BitStitchPunk Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Dark and lovely :)
WolfQueen013 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Delightfully gruesome, I love it. :iconbigheartplz:
Skymasham600 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
I like it. I luv toymaker stories.
marine7000 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
I love it. It's so dark and amazing! Keep up the great work <3
Starsieinwonderland Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Student Artist
So creepy! Its great!
Light-Dusk Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Excuse me while I go cry in a corner.
JadedStrayHyena Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I flashed back to Dead Space 2 on that last line. It's... deliciously dark. Yeah, that word works.
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Professional Writer
Bwahaha it was a good game eh? :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
JadedStrayHyena Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great game.
TheSoaringStaraptor Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Reminds me of Mad Father...
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