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Ah my dear, how are you feeling?
Not too uncomfortable I hope...

You see, you are another,
Lucky individual.
A wondrous being, handpicked by me,
For you are perfect.

Now then,

Before you start screaming,
Before all that noise and unpleasantry befouls these soft red lips.
I've taken the liberty of removing your tongue...

Wag, wag, wag;
That's all it was doing when I extracted it.
Like some, infectious insect

But oh, I shouldn't raise my voice.
That's not very proper of me, hehe.

Now, let's put some markings on you.

Mmm - I'm going to have to get rid of all this, excess.
You see, I can't have a toy that's all bulging in the wrong places.
Dolls are slim, dolls are pretty.
So no, we can't have that...

We'll just slowly slide this tiny slip of metal.
Shlip, shlop, shlip, shlop - and pull!
You see, you see?
It comes right off, like a layer of yellow and red.

Ugh, it's all oily and slick. Yuck!

But, after we're done
We can't have you getting infected can we?
So I'm going to get a little of, daddy's drink.
And we'll pour it all over, to make the bad bugs go away...

Ah, ah, ah, ah, control yourself.
Just because you're awake now doesn't mean you can move.
If you do, it'll tear apart all the other stitches.
But don't worry, they'll be hidden when I put you in a lovely dress.

Now, would you be ever so kind my dear,
And lean your beautiful head back.
I've got to remove those nasty bulbs of yours,
And replace them with these lovely round eyes.

Hee, cross my heart and hope to die.
Stick the plier in their eye! <3
Commissioned piece for :iconkerrinox: - Thank you so much for giving me this opportunity (^_^)/

Audio of this poem can be found here: soundcloud.com/siddhartha-chen…

:iconpointcommissionopen:

If you want your own commissions of poetry and/or flash fiction done. Please feel free to send me a note. Details on how to ask for the commission are in my journal.

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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8BitStitchPunk Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Dark and lovely :)
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WolfQueen013 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Delightfully gruesome, I love it. :iconbigheartplz:
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Skymasham600 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
I like it. I luv toymaker stories.
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marine7000 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
I love it. It's so dark and amazing! Keep up the great work <3
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Starsieinwonderland Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Student Artist
So creepy! Its great!
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Light-Dusk Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Excuse me while I go cry in a corner.
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JadedStrayHyena Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I flashed back to Dead Space 2 on that last line. It's... deliciously dark. Yeah, that word works.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Professional Writer
Bwahaha it was a good game eh? :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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:iconjadedstrayhyena:
JadedStrayHyena Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great game.
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TheSoaringStaraptor Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Reminds me of Mad Father...
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Professional Writer
haha yes, many others have said the same :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Kittahi Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
if you actually think about this, this can actually happen and it scares me but i love this poem. ;__;
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Professional Writer
Glad that you like it, but your text is small and hard to read ^^;

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Ninja615 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this interests me. 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Professional Writer
Glad you enjoyed it x'3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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kuki12345 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
........
Sleep is overrated anyway.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Professional Writer
Indeed it is, best stay up ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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RoseExorcist Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013   General Artist
Agreed. *shivers*
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Lady-Dracoleo101 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Ohh my! This was a great read!!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you for enjoying it ^^

Don't forget to enjoy the audio too :3

And if you ever want something awesome written, consider commissioning me ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Lady-Dracoleo101 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
No argument here. Keep up the great work! c: Can't wait for more scribbles!!!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Professional Writer
More is on its way ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Cruel-Quillish Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, ah, ah, ah, control yourself.
Just because you're awake now doesn't mean you can move.
If you do, it'll tear apart all the other stitches.

Fellow toymaker, did you not know of the drug that can aid you?
 Rohypnol will be your best friend,
Stops the toys from moving on their own
But won't stop them from breathing.

So you can dangle them by their strings
Unhindered by their own wants and needs.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Haha, no unfortunately drugs keep them unaware and we can't have that. What fun is a puppet if it doesn't resist?

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Cruel-Quillish Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is true, but I more prefer my puppet sedated so they can't resist my pull.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
To each their own eh? ;3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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crysanthemum963 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Dang, that made me cringe. Seriously, great job!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly for enjoying it ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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crysanthemum963 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
:iconherotimeplz: Anytime~
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FluffyShocolateSheep Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, nice and creepy ^^
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you for enjoying it :3

If you ever want something commissioned, I'm the man ;3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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AnimalFanatic Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is... wow. I can't even think of a word for this.
Just truly amazing, it really creeped me out haha x3
I'm more than slightly afraid to listen to the audio though hahah. I don't do scary!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Haha, try it out :3 You might find yourself enjoying it ^^

Anyway, if you ever want something done, you know who to look for :3 I'm the guy to commission >:3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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RebeccaMArt Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student General Artist
love it! so creepy, it keeps the reader into it
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you very much for enjoying it ^^

If you ever want anything commissioned, feel free to look me up :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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RebeccaMArt Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student General Artist
ok thanks :)
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
holy crappppppp!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is a masterpiece!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
(^_^)b

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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noorelven Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
nicely dark ! :D 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Glad to have fulfilled your dark needs x'3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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noorelven Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
hahaha lol :D 
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Alice-Lupin Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Professional General Artist
ah, those wonderful shivers down my spine
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Always good to give them to people no? x'3

Hehe, thanks for enjoying my work and if you ever want something done. Feel free to look me up ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Alice-Lupin Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional General Artist
It most certainly is :) Keep up the good work!
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Echo-Neko8 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
This is really good! ^.^ It's the kind of thing you pick up and after the first line know you should put it down, but you're drawn in by then and have to read the whole thing. Your voice acting is awesome!!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Hohoho, that just means I leveled up ^^

Thank you for enjoying my work friend :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Echo-Neko8 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
You're more than welcome ^.^

-Echo Neko
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agentsharde Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dark, but for some reason, captivatingly chilling
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Darkness should not be feared, only admired from a distance. Unless you want to go on a murderous rampage x'3

In any case, thank you for enjoying my work ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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BladeBites Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Absolutely beautiful as usual. I can quite honestly say you're my favorite poet, more so than Poe, which is saying something! c:
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