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The Night Visit

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She arrives on time each night,
With a flurry of quick footsteps, 
Followed by a timid knock at my door.

The reply I give her is often curt,
'Enter,' I'll say
And she does.

I spend a moment taking stock of her appearance:
Noticing bare skin beneath a heavy brown coat.
A few droplets of sweat run down her neck,
And she swallows nervously as she awaits my instruction.

I approach her slowly;
Enjoying this moment where the distance closes.
My eyes take their time to pull her into focus,
And like a bolt of awareness she becomes vivid;
Her lips a sparkling red and utterly lush for a kiss...

Her eyes are doe-eyed and completely tame;
Her makeup is perfect, as I've always liked.
But I can tell, beneath that flawless surface,
That it was rushed under a dim streetlight.

At this point our lips are separated by a bare inch,
I like to leave this distance as I stare into her eyes.
I enjoy the way her breath quickens as I ask her the question,
The question that begins our night:

'Did your husband see you leave my dear?'
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Author's Comment:

My dear Chennies and Chennettes,

Since my last semi-dark, semi-erotic piece received some pleasant comments. I decided to do another one. This one is a little more overt, but of course I kept to my rule of never actually putting anything mature in the content.

Please do enjoy it and the piece was also performed on youtube so I'd appreciate a comment on the voice, since I need to know how that's working out.

Other than that, look forward to more my friends ^^

Also in continuing with what I stated in the other poem, applications for slaves are open. Minions make my world go round, so come be one today :D You shall receive on the job training on how to cower and fawn (O3O)/

- Word of Chen :iconwordofchen:

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By the way, if you have the time, check out more pieces from me:

ShadesI'll lay you down upon this bed,
Eyes blinded with a strip of black cloth.
I'll take my time to circle around you.
Enjoying the light aroma of fear and sweat;
Mixed with just a hint of excitement.
I'll see your legs pushed together,
Perhaps in anticipation.
Or would it be the butterflies;
That dance a shade of scarlet upon your cheeks.
I'll take my time to run these fingers
Along your soft milky white skin.
And even before you part your lips to confirm it,
I'll already know that you belong to me.

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