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The Little Seed:

Little seed floating
Dreaming that he may blossom
Drowned by the currents

-Chen Yuan Wen, Unofficial Release
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As ye all know tha Captain be drownin' in work and as ye may not know he has an Auditing Test tomorrow, so send him a psychic good luck vibe and enjoy this lil' haiku. If I recall correctly he wrote it about 3 months ago and it was never released.

Don't forget t' fave if ye like it ^^

-Co-captain Hayes :iconlugialuvr13:
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~PopCornSalt Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww... :(
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intresting. i really dont know if i should be laughing or sad right now...
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~IsabelFlame Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow.
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poor seed, but it was just fated :I
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~reflectionsinwater Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The ending is quite unexpected, (i pity the poor thing :( ) Well nicely conveyed.
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Mood: Joy *IRideAMagicalLadle Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely! Short, sweet, and to the point- all surrounded with mystery. :clap:
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Mood: Wow! ~Cuadee Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Is this an analogy to comparing a person/group to a seed and how it wants to fully "blossom" and educate itself but society and peer pressure are drowning it out?
Or is it comparing a human to the seed; the person wanting to become famous but the new mainstreams drown out what it was trying to become famous for?

Still a great haiku. Love it
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Mood: Love ~TheWritingHand Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love Haiku. But it's hard for me.
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