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The Little Seed:

Little seed floating
Dreaming that he may blossom
Drowned by the currents

-Chen Yuan Wen, Unofficial Release
As ye all know tha Captain be drownin' in work and as ye may not know he has an Auditing Test tomorrow, so send him a psychic good luck vibe and enjoy this lil' haiku. If I recall correctly he wrote it about 3 months ago and it was never released.

Don't forget t' fave if ye like it ^^

-Co-captain Hayes :iconlugialuvr13:
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TwiUnderSeeker Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
Great Job.
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PopCornSalt Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww... :(
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noorelven Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
Profound !
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ninjagraffiti Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
intresting. i really dont know if i should be laughing or sad right now...
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IsabelFlame Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
wow.
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
poor seed, but it was just fated :I
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reflectionsinwater Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The ending is quite unexpected, (i pity the poor thing :( ) Well nicely conveyed.
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IRideAMagicalLadle Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely! Short, sweet, and to the point- all surrounded with mystery. :clap:
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Cuadee Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Is this an analogy to comparing a person/group to a seed and how it wants to fully "blossom" and educate itself but society and peer pressure are drowning it out?
Or is it comparing a human to the seed; the person wanting to become famous but the new mainstreams drown out what it was trying to become famous for?

Still a great haiku. Love it
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TheWritingHand Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love Haiku. But it's hard for me.
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kedonsine Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Depressing. Good Luck Ta Captain Chen Even Though I Know You Won't Need It.
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crysanthemum963 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
Wow, that was depressing O_O.
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Geobukseon Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Writer
Depressing... dang it, Hayes! Get ol' Chen to make somethin' more longer and upbeat!
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Geobukseon Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Writer
...yet it still gets close to front page. Can't be denyin' it be Chen even though it sucks ya soul out.
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hakkaobake Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well written. *Concentrating on good luck vibe* :dummy: :headache:
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Krusnik03 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll make sure to send him that good luck vibe. XD
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
what lovely short poem
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rainy129 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
what. there's like a mountain of emotion in 3 little lines. Good job. :)
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Krystallien Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I heard that Haikus are difficult to write, but this is well done, I think. :3

*psychic good luck vibe* :3
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Zephyras-Lied Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
THIs is a nice haiku. Good luck on the Auditing test! :icongoodluckplz:
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theGman0 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist
short and simple, though still well written.......me gusta
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PsychoticBunny2010 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
Very nice. Not 100% in the essence of haiku, but it has a lot more meaning in the manner in which it has been put. The cap has done a good job. He's lucky to have a friend like you Captain Hayes :)
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