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The Lie of Vengeance:

It begins first as a smouldering fire;
A heat that swelters and burns inside your own heart.
It then roars to life as a flame of destruction;
Seeking, hungrily, to consume all who are bound by it...

This is the gift of vengeance
A kiss so sweet that it could only be an evil temptation.
Yet all will seek it in darkness;
For there is none who can resist its sweet allure...

It is like a friend in your time of need;
Comforting and seemingly understanding of your pain.
It tells you that you need to stand up for yourself;
It tells you that others must fall for you to live on!

But this is a lie! Obvious as it might seem;
Many fail to notice the intricacy of this deception.
It is difficult to fathom that the glory and relief which vengeance grants you;
Is naught but an ephemeral wind, existing only for a moment...

Shame and guilt will then crush your spirit
And the emptiness of the void begins to ring hollow within your soul.
The hole which you sought to fill with the taste of revenge;
Has instead grown into a wider pit, one that can never be filled...

Even so, we still cling to our suffering...
Because even if we have this wisdom, we are defined by our suffering;
Just as it is defined by us...

It is difficult to see what is right and wrong in the fog of anger
But I believe that this confusion within us, is at least a part of the answer.
We may not know where, why or even how to rid ourselves of these feelings;
But the proof that we are thinking about it, is the first sign that its chains are slowly loosening...

And perhaps someday, we will truly be free...

-Chen Yuan Wen, 10th May 2012
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AUTHOR'S COMMENT:

Today, Inspiration week officially begins. I have decided to focus more on doing pieces that are actually inspirational. SOME will be inspired by songs, but not all.

This piece for example, I wrote to warm up for the week and test a pure free verse style.

Often, I am prone to experimentation with other styles of poetry, because I feel my own style to be...lacking.

However, I have decided that rhyme is who I am and I will not be able to achieve consistency without it. This piece has taught me much about the difficulty of constructing pure free verse poems, but I have learned more about myself in completing it. I am suited for a particular style and I should focus on sharpening it, it is good to have other styles, but you can never forget your MAIN style.

OTHER POEMS BY ME:

The Farseer - [link]
The Sadist - [link]
Hunting the Witch - [link]
The Witch Hunter - [link]
A World of Blood - [link]
Swan Song - [link]

OTHER LITERATURE BY ME:

Knight Run 2 - [link]
Knight Run- [link]
SANGUINE Chapter 1 - 1 - [link]
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:icongilpires:
"A kiss so sweet that it could only be an evil temptation." That one is "the shit"! xD matter of speech That's an awesome poem!!!!
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*WordOfChen Sep 28, 2012  Professional Writer
I re-read this and realised no one picked up the repeated mistake in the poem xD

Thanks for enjoying ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Mood: Love ~TheEmeraldMasquerade Jun 8, 2012  Student General Artist
That's absolutely true.
Definitely one of my favourite :)
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*WordOfChen Sep 28, 2012  Professional Writer
Wow, super late reply on this one:iconorzplz:

Thanks for reading ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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~TheEmeraldMasquerade Sep 29, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome :)
Don't worry, it's nothing, really ^-^
I understand what busy means :D
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:iconprussiancrimsonheart:
Beautiful wording! I love it!!
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*WordOfChen May 25, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank ye very kindly fer enjoyin' me work ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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~Getsuei-san May 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow, that was just... amazing and truly inspirational.
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