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Such Beautiful People:

Beautiful people, you see and believe
But don't you know that they are rife with disease?
Little maggots, that crawl in their flesh
They walk around with a hole in their chest.

They try to pull you, they push you to be
They make a horror; now it's staring at me!
Abomination in the mirror you see
Are you so sick, that you cannot believe?

Oh! These beautiful people, they make you believe,
But you don't want to catch their horrid disease
Little maggots that crawl in their flesh
You hear the lies on their putrid breath.

Now! They tell you how to live and how you should be
But they're ones who will never be free.
Trapped by the mirror and what they see
Is there a devil called Vanity?

Yeah! These beautiful people, they make you believe,
But you don't want to catch their horrid disease.
Little maggots that crawl in their flesh,
You feel the lies on their putrid breath...

-Chen Yuan Wen, 9th March 2012
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Arrr maties, please feel free ta do one of the above (or all of the above if you like me enough). It's helping me in my career ^^

PERSONAL MESSAGE:

Alright pirates, ye've seen me write raps and urban rhythms, but how about a kick back ta the genre of darkness.

Some of you might have MISSED this kind of evil. Well, I'll be releasin' plenty over the weekend. After all, I'm in a VERY dark mood these days...

HYAR HAR!

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:

OTHER POEMS BY ME:
You Can't Stop Me - [link]
Struggling at Life -[link]
I Am So Disturbed - [link]
Sweet Bird in A Cage - [link]
Bullies in the Hall - [link]
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
wow you are the capt'n of the DA ship!
This is the most amazing poem I've ever read. seriously.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Professional Writer
You are most welcome my friend ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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Siren-Badru Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Student General Artist
wow. i never thought of beauty as a disease before, but now I see where the poem comes from. I see the logic in it.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr anything can be a disease, it's just the ailments are not always obvious ;3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:
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Siren-Badru Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Student General Artist
I see..* stroke the invisible beard of freedom*
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
well i tell you something, if i have not told you before, argh memory is failing me at this age :iconfacepalmplz: though currently i am not overweight , and i hope to keep it that way, i am actually afraid of skinny people, because of a documentary i saw in my memory, but i don't think it actually existed, but oh well creepy, perfection is just as creeps for me, but ironically, being a girl, i am vain... and i aim for the best of my ability.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr haha, the best kind of girl is neither skinny nor chubby, but instead fit, strong and beautiful.

I dig wonder woman :3

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconjackfireplz:
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012
ooh but wonder woman can wear tight clothes and still look good
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