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She scatters the seeds with her tiny hands.

And pictures the sunset in a distant land.

She dreams of places, where she'd be free.

With clouds as far as the eyes could see.

And there she'd dance to the song of the rain,

While I would watch from my window pane.

With a smile befitting such a lovely girl;

The daughter I lost, to a cruel world...

Happy Birthday Raine...Happy birthday to you.

Based on this picture by Laya: fav.me/d5r4ym8
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KurlyKrazyKat Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful! No words to describe but beautiful...
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:iconz0r0o:
Nice :))))) so cheerful
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candygirl101010 Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
your poetry some how captures the most beautyfull emotions ive never read anything like it i feal you should try and publish your work to a book. i'de buy it in a heart beat
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He has a book, actually.
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candygirl101010 Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
REELY!? im in awe
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SylverFire-Lilithe Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome!!! Really deep!! Love it!!
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DarkCameleon Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful, can you tell me who Raine is?
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Garrison-Kelly Sep 5, 2013  Professional Writer
The last line is certainly the heart string puller of the poem. Good job, as usual.
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