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She scatters the seeds with her tiny hands.

And pictures the sunset in a distant land.

She dreams of places, where she'd be free.

With clouds as far as the eyes could see.

And there she'd dance to the song of the rain,

While I would watch from my window pane.

With a smile befitting such a lovely girl;

The daughter I lost, to a cruel world...

Happy Birthday Raine...Happy birthday to you.

Based on this picture by Laya: fav.me/d5r4ym8
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KurlyCrazyKat Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful! No words to describe but beautiful...
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z0r0o Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Nice :))))) so cheerful
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
your poetry some how captures the most beautyfull emotions ive never read anything like it i feal you should try and publish your work to a book. i'de buy it in a heart beat
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GlassMuses Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
He has a book, actually.
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Student Writer
REELY!? im in awe
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GlassMuses Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013

www.smashwords.com/books/view/…

That's the link to it.

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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Writer
thx ^_^
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SylverFire-Lilithe Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome!!! Really deep!! Love it!!
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DarkCameleon Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful, can you tell me who Raine is?
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Garrison-Kelly Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Professional Writer
The last line is certainly the heart string puller of the poem. Good job, as usual.
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chinduda Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the ending though... ;_;
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of-the-skies Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful ;w;
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AnimeART-by-Ari-a Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh quite lovely indeed! i can just imagine a beautiful image in my head now...
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Russianbear09 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful!!!
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DTakai Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student Filmographer
This is so beautiful!!!! *.* And very inspirational ;)
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Perianth5 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Awww! Beautiful~ :3
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Argentum-Lupae-Luna Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This si so beautiful and sad...I love it.
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Bullcross Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm pointing out - In the first, third and fourth rhyming pairs you miscounted the syllables
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Alphora Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
noticed that too....
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LayaAmaranthi Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*Martian Vulcan Jedi Pirate Ninja Master jump pounce tackle huggle glomps Chen*
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ThisLittleBluebird Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is beautiful, loving the imagery here. C:
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