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Pain ends, but you must not.
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Hey there guys,

Just got my microphone TONIGHT! So expect some sounds TOMORROW :'3

Other than that, please enjoy this six-word story, it's just a nice little piece I wanted to write to tell people that you should NEVER give up. Never think about giving up, no matter how hard the road gets, because pain is transient and temporary, but death...that's final.

-Chen :iconwordofchen:

Mini-Challenge (Open for all - Link me when you comment so I can return the view!):

Do an emotional six word story, but the feels gotta be real! Do any topic, it's cool :'3

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Italianschizoidboy Featured By Owner Edited Sep 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Well, this is patronizing! Who are you to tell anyone what to do? And besides I believe people who go through ACTUAL pain (unlike that thing about spare change on DA you mention on a comment) want to kill themself EXACTLY because death is final, rather than enduring a rollercoaster of pain that may or may not end and when it ends it might come again anytime, they just want to end it all.
Sorry if I'm being harsh, but really, these pieces of naivety really grind my gears and as someone who's struggling with depression and anxiety and wishes he could find the strength to get out of this shithole we call life, I honestly feel OFFENDED by them.
And before you answer with the classic BS such as "I was trying to be positive", I believe there are no such things as “positivity”, “negativity”, “optimism” or “pessimism”, there is only reality.
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TheVictimOfReality Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconeyeplz:
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:iconliyaperfidious:
liyaperfidious Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2015
*like*
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  Professional Writer
I look forward to it ^^

- Word of Chen :iconwordofchen:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  Professional Writer
Okay :)

- Word of Chen :iconwordofchen:
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ComixThreeSevens Featured By Owner May 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Why shouldn't we give up?
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  Professional Writer
Because I'd like to believe that in this world...there is still hope!

- Word of Chen :iconwordofchen:
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xXPocketCatXx Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  Student Artist
These are only six words. It is small but beautiful. You are gifted. You can make six words into a deep, touching sentence. Thank you.
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:iconlakednunch:
lakednunch Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
I disagree. Suicide is the only option apart from drugs.
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:iconbeitlacking:
BeItLacking Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I just adore this---a lot of meaning in very few words. Great job!
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:icon1nconceivable:
1nconceivable Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
Short and meaningful, I like it! Sixwordstories.net has some really good ones that you should take a look at. 
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:iconcopper9lives:
copper9lives Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Professional General Artist
Simply, beautifully put.
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:iconthatpinkwolf:
ThatPinkWolf Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Pain never ends, what you feal is pain. Pain is always with us until we die, everything you breath, touch, eat, drink is pain.
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:iconklevry1:
klevry1 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
vice verse
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:iconcassandracanadyart:
CassandraCanadyArt Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Professional General Artist
Love it.
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:icongrublitnav:
Grublitnav Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Life without pain would be dull. Thank God for that.
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:iconmissunashamed:
MissUnashamed Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This. Is. Perfect. Heart 
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:iconaggromiau:
AggroMiau Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Epic words - Thanks for the reminder - :dalove:
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:iconzelgadisgw:
ZelgadisGW Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Simple is best" - Xellos, Slayers.
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Professional Writer
Already got your mention mate x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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:iconfaydie:
Faydie Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that was deep .
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly for enjoying it ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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:iconartofmelancholy:
artofmelancholy Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is the first time I've :+fav:'d a Lit piece. It was *that* beautiful.
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you very much ^^ I'm glad you liked it and I hope you like some of my others too :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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artofmelancholy Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll check them out c:
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Professional Writer
Great!

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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artofmelancholy Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^
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:iconline-raptor:
line-raptor Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
flippin beautiful :')
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you for liking it ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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awake1 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
I don't understand - for some the pain never ends, for example - the loss of a child.
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Professional Writer
Aye, in that case it may go on :/ but even so...you must not end 

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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ShaedowDanceGlam Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
I didn't originally write this for the challenge, but I thought "It's six words, enter it!". So here it is:
shaedowdanceglam.deviantart.co…
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Professional Writer
Reviewed it, nice work :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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:iconhelgaukasaki:
HelgaUkasaki Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
wow
so poet
such deep
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Professional Writer
Very Doge :icondoge-plz:

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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TrulyAwakened Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Professional Writer
Attempted it! BTW Great poem.
trulyawakened.deviantart.com/a…
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Professional Writer
Link doesn't work bro ^^;

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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:iconpantstrovich:
Pantstrovich Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014   General Artist
Thanks for the reminder.
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Professional Writer
Most welcome ^^

-Siddhartha Chen :iconwordofchen:
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:iconinsuredinsanity:
InsuredInsanity Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
Thumbs up to this.
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly ^^

-Siddhartha Chen :iconwordofchen:
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:iconesmeeverafter:
EsmeEverAfter Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
Wow.
I don't think I've ever seen so much said with so few words before.
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Professional Writer
I'm glad you liked it :'3

-Siddhartha Chen :iconwordofchen:
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Fire-Star-Bird Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
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