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[link]Author's Comment:Arrr maties,
Today I decided t' do somethin' creative. So I used the common format o' six words t' make a complete phrase/sentence and combined a multitude of them together.
Therefore each line is composed of exactly six words. Ye might think of this as a collage o' six word stories (though some lines are chained together).
In any case the reason I did this, was t' share me technique fer overcoming writer's block. This is the latest technique that I've developed and is much more applicable than mah previous advice to just 'go insane'.
*Switch to common english accent here*
Instead I've found that to break through a writer's block or an art block, you have to write and draw respectively. However doing your usual works will be nearly impossible, since your brain will be all frazzled and stuff. Hence, I decided to refresh my overheated mind by doing something simple. Haikus, six word stories, SHORT poems and just very short works in general will help your brain get back into the writing mood. If you try to write works of the usual length you'll just overheat further and get frustrated and sink deeper into the quicksand.
I'm not sure if the same applies to art but I believe it should. Instead of doing a full image, do a chibi or perhaps stick figures with chibi heads, then slowly add detail, until you're ready ^^
Anywho, that's all from me.
*Back to pirate accent*

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Your poem is good, but the bag revolution must be fulfilled! It is without a doubt that the universe we are living in has seen too much carnage and chaos (by the way, you have used fine choice of font, each sentence has a story of its own) and for too long have we found ourselves struggling to incur ourselves towards an almighty bane which is inevitable (I found no connection between my critique and your work, but you get the point).
This work is good, and it is emphasis on the six word stories while also being in itself a composition of ideas. It does feel like you were in a slump when you wrote it (actually no, it wasn't till I read the author's description that I knew you were in a slump, but that is irrelevant here) its a decent enough read, if not one which makes one wonder what is written... after which point one realizes, yes this is what was written.
Good work, "Cap'n" (or so you humans say) and may you continue in your raid.
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