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She dances with fire, a dragon in tow.

Twirling with flames; graceful and slow

She dances tonight, in a city of ash.

Her feet leaving footprints, where the sand will splash.

Quietly mourning, as time goes by;

Where once she beheld a home in her eyes...

Yet naught but the barest of bones remain,

And so she dances, to soothe the pain.




Based on this picture: fav.me/d6kzij0

So laya and I were talkin' about talky stuff and I was not feeling too good today. Many things happened, but then she drew that picture and I was all like...'I gotta write to this' and so I wrote to it .3.

Yeaaaaah :icondealwithitplz:

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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livethelifeyoulov3 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student General Artist
I absolutely LOVE this poem, thanks so much for writing this man! :D
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moogyAKA Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
I don't often stay stunned by a poem, but this one... man, I'm stuck in those lines. Wonderful work.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Glad ye liked it that much :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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moogyAKA Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
I checked your other poems as well, you're really good! Never stop x)
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Professional Writer
I never will mate :3

Sorry bout the slow reply

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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KurlyCrazyKat Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...sdrow on...swrow oN
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye, but ye mispelled yer first backwards phrase x'D

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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KurlyCrazyKat Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahahaha! Ooops!
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EyeGoCrazy Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful work, I love the imagery. I could really see what you described in my mind's eye.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye very kindly ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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