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She dances with fire, a dragon in tow.

Twirling with flames; graceful and slow

She dances tonight, in a city of ash.

Her feet leaving footprints, where the sand will splash.

Quietly mourning, as time goes by;

Where once she beheld a home in her eyes...

Yet naught but the barest of bones remain,

And so she dances, to soothe the pain.




Based on this picture: fav.me/d6kzij0

So laya and I were talkin' about talky stuff and I was not feeling too good today. Many things happened, but then she drew that picture and I was all like...'I gotta write to this' and so I wrote to it .3.

Yeaaaaah :icondealwithitplz:

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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livethelifeyoulov3 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student General Artist
I absolutely LOVE this poem, thanks so much for writing this man! :D
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moogyAKA Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
I don't often stay stunned by a poem, but this one... man, I'm stuck in those lines. Wonderful work.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Glad ye liked it that much :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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moogyAKA Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
I checked your other poems as well, you're really good! Never stop x)
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Professional Writer
I never will mate :3

Sorry bout the slow reply

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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KurlyCrazyKat Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...sdrow on...swrow oN
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye, but ye mispelled yer first backwards phrase x'D

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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KurlyCrazyKat Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahahaha! Ooops!
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EyeGoCrazy Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful work, I love the imagery. I could really see what you described in my mind's eye.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye very kindly ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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EyeGoCrazy Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome
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SkyChamber Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
^ Yes ^
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EyeGoCrazy Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Dionysus34 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
love it ,
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Cocolena Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student Writer
wow i love this poem!
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gillian-raine Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful!
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Wolfgisella Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
-> Short, but great. You are a very talented writer, is what you are. I bow down to your expertise. 
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beanlvspigs Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
great job

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synergyarrow Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Lovely verses :)
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kar4all Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
beautiful
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Sorosoro Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
You sir are inspired! With such a good mind you might build an empire! Of this poem I shall not forget and for that it shall be said that! This poem is faved. Congratulations. Mate.
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AngelVahn Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Somehow when I hear this it makes me think of Yuna from FFX. I love this poem though, good job.
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CloakedInSecrets Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love it! <333
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MehIsBob Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Bootifull
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leftyliz14 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
Has a nice rhythm to it. I'm sure you get this a lot, but it reminds me of Daenerys Targaryen. Not sure if you watch Game of Thrones, but that made an already neat poem enjoyable for me. 
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Silver-Pheanix Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student General Artist
wow... i don't know why but i immediately thought this would be a great song.
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Nymeria99 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
Loved it!
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amandaowl Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
Beautiful
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GardenofFears Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lovely!
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romancefreak Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wooooow. Such beauty!!
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Dorothy-of-Oz Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
Thanx for such a Beauty which came swirlin' within my day, beautifull unxpected. Keep making such amazing verses. Love it!!!!
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Peluchyteddy Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifully written, it such an interesting story.
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Wherewulf14 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Reminds me of Danaerys Stormborn from Game of Thrones.
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Dreamsaretreasures Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
Wow, okay, this was absolutely beautiful.
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TwinTornado22 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student Photographer
Nice!
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Roozilla13 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is just gorgeous!
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LadyElizabethMidford Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist
Can i get my virus in pink?
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NesuraMisuzu Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
d-u-d-e g-e-t t-h-e h-e-c-k o-f-f. w-h-a-t i-s y-o-u-r f-r-e-a-k-i-n-g p-r-o-b-l-e-m
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Kyta-Satora Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
It sounds like something u wuld here in lord of the rings 
SUGOI
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Makaylafashion Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is beautiful!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye kindly fer enjoyin' it :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Reprogrammed Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student Writer
You, sir, have TALENT. Extreme talent. Especially when it comes to rhyming. Yours is so smooth and unforced (if that's even a word).
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye kindly ^^ I originally started with rhyme so it's actually my strongest suit, but I prefer free-verse these days :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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kattfrost5ever Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fantastic!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye kindly ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Aljexi1922 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
So beautiful!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye x'D

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Aljexi1922 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
Your welcome!
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DeathByCelloCase Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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