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Shatter Point:

Can you see
what all the world has-
Done to me
I've locked away my-
Sa-ni-ty
I wanna break
Huma-ni-ty

(Kiru oh!)

My shatter point, my shatter point
I'm up against the wall at my shatter point
A thousand faces keep calling to me into the night
Their whispers drive me further up and away from the light!

Waste Away
Just fall again and-
break today
I want you down and you'll-
Fade away
Just stop breathing and-
Die today!

(Kiru oh!)

The shatter point, the shatter point
You know that you are up and against the wall
The shatter point, my shatter point
Leave me breaking against my shatter point

A thousand faces keep calling me into the night
I'll waste away in the whispers that taint all the light
Just leave me breaking against the weight of the wall
It keeps me close to the edge until I learn to FALL!

-Chen Yuan Wen, 25th August 2012
Sorry bout tha delay on Chenbeard's crew acceptance an' all that. He'll be doin' it tomorrow mornin', he was actually busy sortin' out some financial matters with his family, but everythin' is alright and there is no cause fer concern. We'd just like a lil' bit more time ^^

Furthermore tha Captain has decided t' officially return next week an' start workin' on all new material. In tha mean time, please enjoy this Emotional song :3

Tha parts in italics should be read as a distorted but strong scream (neither high-pitched nor low, but somethin' moderately pitched), whilst the normal parts are sung in a strong male voice.

If ye read it like that and treat it in a song-like manner, tha emotions are enhanced. That is the technique that Chen is tryin' to work with in this piece and hopefully ye'll get t' see more o' it soon :3

From both o' us at Word of Chen, thanks fer tha support ^^

-Co-captain Hayes :iconlugialuvr13:
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Myennaius13 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
Sounds like somone has way too much crap bearing down on their shoulders; I know what that's like.
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TwiUnderSeeker Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
Great job.
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ChocolateShortcake77 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
Very strong & emotional.
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sumgie1 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
This is pretty awesome. I have long been interested in how music, which has such a great effect on emotions, can be incorporated into literature. This technique seems promising. Personally, with the motives of insanity and other, I imagined it as a Disturbed song and felt the edgy taste of metal while reading these lyrics.
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kalic00 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
read it in the voice of Alissa White-Gluz from the agonist, i believe this would make a metalcore superhit, either theirs or skillet's :D
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Amaya2278 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice piece, I'd probably have more intelligent things to say about it if it wasn't half past five in the morning lol. :)
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
whats kiru oh :\???? <-- very blur here
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GlassMuses Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
Before reading the description, I actually read the song that way. Man, I wanna hear the music this thing would go to! It's awesome!
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angel3433 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Omegut Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
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