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Sensual Torture:

You are but a simple pawn;
Caught in a maelstrom of ill feelings and turmoil.
You were not meant to be here -
But unfortunately, here you are my friend...

Now then, I do not wish to drag this out;
There is no purpose in badgering someone who knows so little.
However - without your confession - I'm afraid that
I would not know whom I should share my - pleasures with...

Though I'm certain that you will be sharing plenty...

Of course, it will probably be a poor idea to make you scream,
At least not while I'm still enjoying your fear.
Instead we'll begin with a simple agony;
A quick taste of your pain to whet my appetite...

We'll begin with just a thin incision,
One that is made in the center of both your eyelids.
And then, then we'll make another cut - this one just above the eyes...

Ah, I will adore the feeling of watching your skin peel apart
As the scalpel bites in and draws it aside; much like the curtain
Set upon a theatre stage. It is the signal for our show to begin.

The pain and the pressure of blinking with torn eyelids
Will most likely force you to scrunch up your entire face.
And as you endure this agonizing trial, the first droplet of blood
Will slowly ride down toward your wounded eyes;
A gentle river of red, flowing down your skin.

It will eventually fall against your Sclera, searing it, burning it
It will make you blink and shiver with pain as your body jerks and convulses.
An endless cycle of discomfort and suffering, as that which should relieve it
Perpetuates it for an eternity...

That my friend, is when you truly realise what I can do with you
That is when you will pray to your gods for release; but none will come.
And I shall enjoy every moment of watching your mind break
As I gently and tenderly lick the cold sweat away from your neck.

The taste of fear, the gasps of air that are locked within your lungs;
A sensual torture that is beyond imagining. This pain, this pleasure
Is my gift to you. It is my art, my worship and my devotion
To the Lady whom I serve eternally.

Now tell me my dearest Bishop:

"Where is the temple keeping my loving queen Morgana?"

-Chen Yuan Wen, 3rd November 2012
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If you'd like to hear me read this poem LIVE and do a little comedy then then check out episode 4 of my live show here: [link]

Author's Comment:

Arrr maties, this be me last official poem before me hiatus (I may still write on some days t' take a break). I'll be back full time on the 20th of November with another comeback episode on the 21st (where I'll do multiple readings of poems).

Anyway, about this poem itself. It's actually a scene preview for the story I'll be working on over the summer, containing an ALL NEW writing format that I've created. It's a Chen-style format and it will allow me to combine first-person and third-person writing. Want to see it? It's coming!

The scene I used is actually the main protagonist (though he's a villain) of the series, torturing one of the temple's Bishops. This character, Lin'Chen the Necromancer, is a dark and clearly sadistic individual with deep knowledge of pain. I mean common devices like thumb screws and the rack are all nice, but this is something you can do just by strapping someone in a chair and keeping them tied down. He prefers an elegant torture, because pain is an art and inflicting it is worship/devotion.

To those who requested the really sadistic darkness, I hope that this satisfies you. I certainly enjoyed writing it mmm...

Pirate accent will also be back on the 21st wh00

-Captain Chenbeard o' th' Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

Other Poems by Me:
An Oath to My FatherAn Oath to My Father:

The chill of winter is nothing, when compared to the cold inside my heart.

A fire, once stoked by the warmth of family, has quietly died, five falls past.

I dream of my father, who watches from beyond the realms - and my ancestors

Who fought against an endless army of giants, to win the lands we have today.

Just as a devout man honours his God through worship, I honour them through my axe!

Each stroke of the whetstone, each screech of the metal, brings me closer to them -

Even as I draw closer to my doom. Oh how I can feel him, for the anger in my blood

Boils evermore as I sense him approaching my camp. He is hun
This is Halloween!This is Halloween:

Boys and girls of every age
Wouldn't you like to see something strange?

Come with me and you will see
The friends I've hung down from this tree...

This is Halloween, this is Halloween
Corpses scream in the dead of night!

This is Halloween, everybody make a scene
Trick or treat till the neighbors gonna die of fright.
It's our town, everybody scream!
In this town of Halloween...

I am the one hiding under your bed;
Licking your hand with a tongue so red and -

I am the one crawling up your stairs,
Thump-thump-drag, when no one's there...

This is Halloween, this is Halloween

Halloween! Halloween! Halloween! Hallo
There are Things Beneath the GardenThere Are Things Beneath the Garden:

~

There are things beneath the garden,
Which you really shouldn't see.

There are things beneath the garden,
That don't belong to me.

There are things beneath the garden,
Gone rotten blue and black.

There are things beneath the garden,
In a dripping gunny sack...

~

There are flowers in the garden,
Which you really shouldn't pull.

There are flowers in the garden,
That sit on top of wool.

There are flowers in the garden,
With a really rotten scent.

There are flowers in the garden,
Above bodies burnt and bent...

~

I love this little garden,
It's a special place to me.

I love this little g


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Release One: Pages 1 - 3

THE COLD AIR in Baron Rorke's study did little to calm his nerves. He was expecting visitors this night and they were not the best of company. A shiver of dread ran down his spine and he spent most of the twilight hours staring out of a large window which stood behind his writing desk. It was amazing, he felt, how quickly a man could become attached to a life of luxury; only to be made painfully aware of how easy it was to lose it. War was always a frightening thing, even more so when one had the knowledge and sense to realise that it was no longer an exercise of glory, but a si
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Amazing! The words paint a clear picture in the minds of others, showing every side of both the torturer and the victim.
How you read the poem on the link was beautiful, showing even more emotion with the tone and depth of your voice. This is my first reading of one of your poems and I'm glad to say that you have gain another fan of your works and I hope you continue bringing beautiful imagery and inspiring others like you have done with me.
Unfortunately I cannot see any signs or ideas for improvement for I have been swept away by this powerful literature and I'm sure others will agree. :)
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I have but 2 words to describe this piece: beautifully terrifying. I would have never really expected something like this from you, but I have to say you executed it perfectly.

The imagery you used throughout the piece brings it to life, it makes it so real. The detail you are able to infuse while keeping both the piece and the story it is portraying flowing effortless is amazing. At one point, I tell you, my eyes started hurting. xD

This, by far, has to be one of the most unique pieces I've ever read. The combination of the poetry, the story, as well as an insight into a future tale and character make this piece not only versatile but brillant. It definitely gives the reader insight into the character's mind and leaves a feeling of wanting to know more, despite the graphic scene which the character is partaking in.

I love how you used punctuation in this piece to make definitive changes in the story and how the reader feels the emotions the piece presents.

Overall this piece is just outstanding. The pictures you are able to paint with your words are masterpieces worthy of any museum. Another lovely piece, Captain.
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psychosquatch Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
'Twas truly an amazing piece! I, myself dabble with gruesome imagery quite often. My latest one is about being eaten alive in sort of a bdsm way. :)
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xBishopOfChaoSx Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
how the fuck was this the first one I clicked on...
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Professional Writer
Who knows :'3 It's one of the more popular ones x'D

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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WatchingTimePass Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so good I had to press my fingers to my eyelids after I read it because it was almost like I could imagine someone doing that. :eye: :eye:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye fer enjoyin' it dear friend x3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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SlugLady28 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013   General Artist
Dark and disturbing. I got shivers O_O Fantastic!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye fer enjoyin' it ^^ I'm very glad ye liked it :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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EvanescentiFantasmi Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist
Sadistic poetry accompanied with a story?
I love you
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Bwahaha, me thanks fer enjoyin' me work. I do appreciate it ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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EvanescentiFantasmi Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Ye be welcome, Captain o' mine C:


-...'Tis being o' mine has no title to bare....how about Rookie?
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Professional Writer
Aye, if ye wish t' be a rookie then ye can be one as ye please. However a rookie should be helpin' their Captain and soooo. Here's some self-promotion:

T'would really help me out if ye visited me e-book's publication page and liked or shared it. If ye want t' sample it as well, ye can read the first 15% o' the book free.

Here be th' link (^_^)> [link]

Thank ye :iconfluttershyyayplz:

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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iliveasidream Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
Your poetry is so bland and pretentious that I'm going to hang myself.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Please do :3 It would be excellent writing material ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Dragkor Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
This was... Creepy... Beautiful... Paradoxically good. I fear i'm started being addicted to your poems, and worse! Soon, after i had seen all of them, i will have to wait for more T.Y.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Please feel free to get as addicted as you like, I'll be doing them everyday now :3

All to promote my e-book *___*

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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LupisDarkmoon Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student
*Guiltily throws in faves*
So the "enjoying sadism/torture in literature" thing isn't just my being a messed up person! That's a relief.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye fer enjoyin' it and do check out my e-book if ye like ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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StrawberryVertigo Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
You make death sound so sensual!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Tis how it is meant to be eh? Muhuhuhu

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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noorelven Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
This DOES NOT SATISFY my hunger to know the dark depths that are Chen ... this cloud sees no shade that is too dark yet ...

This is a teaser trailer Chen .. nothing truly sadistic darkness about it particularly when that mind of yours can conjure things close to the nightmare that is Cthulhu !

Anyway it is an EPIC work of art nonetheless! *fave*
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Hold yer horses me friend I'm workin' up t'ward it xD

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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noorelven Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
AWESOME :D cant wait to see it :D
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Professional Writer
Aye aye ye will, but before ye see th' darkness. Let me leave ye with a little o' me shameless self-promotion ^^

T'would really help me out if ye visited me e-book's publication page and liked or shared it. If ye want t' sample it as well, ye can read the first 15% o' the book free.

Here be th' link (^_^)> [link]

Thank ye :iconfluttershyyayplz:

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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noorelven Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
AWESOME !!!!!!!!!! :D
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hollyflower Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
My eyes feel weird now...
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Haha, then the poem has achieved its objective ;3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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hollyflower Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Yes. Yes it has. XD
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TRexyBusiness Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's sadistic, I like it.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Mhmm ^^ Thank you for enjoying it :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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annagrin333 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
...I need to stop reading your sadistic poems when I'm in class...
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Do they make you crack up and laugh? Or grin widely? or smile xD

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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annagrin333 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
....They make me need to have some...err...interesting...conversations with my girlfriend...If you catch my drift.
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dark-harou Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is so beautifully sadistic, I love it! :heart:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you for enjoying it ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

P.S. oh dear god this reply is late
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Your amazing work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly for the honour of being featured ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
You're welcome.
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TalentlessArtlover Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
It's lovely in a way that leaves my eyes burning.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you very much for enjoying this

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

P.S. I am so sorry for the late reply ^^;
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TangerineTerranova Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow. what an awfully beautiful work of art. i thoroughly enjoyed it. :)
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you very much for reading and enjoying it ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

P.S. So sorry about the late reply ^^;
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torridprince Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Horrifyingly the most beautiful work I've seen describing physical pain. Just morbidly awesome.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Mhmm and I hope to do one better some time soon ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

P.S. Sorry for the late reply ^^;
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow. This is amazing. I almost feel the pain while reading it XD well done :)
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it my dear :3 I hope to do more darkness in future ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I look forward to it :)
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cosmosgrl19 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh god it gave me chills. Not just because it is chill inducing, but because it actually made me think of at least three of my characters who are NOT mentally stable. One in particular by the time the line about licking sweat from the neck xD

Also, I'll very much enjoy seeing that unique writing style of yours!! I've tried doing third person-first person before, and I was satisfied, but it kept confusing my sister xD Hopefully you'll have more success since I think you've prob'ly spent more time on developing it
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Professional Writer
Hehe, Im very glad you enjoyed this and I hope that my technique can be used widely by authors who want to describe both the scene and the thoughts of character at the same time ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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cosmosgrl19 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh, I can't wait! :D I know it'll most definately help me, hehe
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PrincessHyunA Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh...I'm not sure if it's the coffee or not but this poem is just so amazing. I just like fell in love with it. It's so descriptive, I can imagine everything. It's just beautiful. Very nicely done.
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