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How many have I had? Why would you ask such a question?

I've had--only three! Yes, three I swear.

What? No--of course not, what are you suggesting.

Those: I can't quite see them clearly. Oh! Oh dear...

No, you, you must understand this was--just a bit of relaxation,

A little sip to help me sleep.

No--No, don't cry, I'm not going back to those days; I'm not!

I swear it was just--just a passing shower I...

I...

I'm sorry...

It's just been hard...

It's been so difficult!

WHERE WAS I SUPPOSED TO TURN?

...

But it's not your fault, I know that.

 I suppose I was simply looking for an excuse...

I was drowning you know, in the icy water.

Cold enough to freeze the lungs.

I stopped and simply drifted away.

Before I knew anything I was already at the bottom of the sea.

...

Thank you...

I'm glad that you at least didn't give up on me...

And I suppose for your sake, I should actually return.

...Very well

I was growing tired of simply drowning in the sea.

What say we try sailing on it once more?

What do you say to that my friend?

Are you bloody with me!

Arrr m'friends,

It's been a VERY rough couple of days fer me. I won't go into details of what happened, simply because I honestly don't feel like talking about it.

But I'm glad t' have those around me who'd know enough t' slap me too me senses.

I've been drowning again for a long time, but it feels good t' see th' sun once again.

I suppose it be time t' get some hands on deck.

If yer done with yer land-lubbin' business, then I want th' sails down and a course set for nothing less than the king's throne!

Now do I hear an 'aye Captain' or do I have t' bring out th' complaints department? That's me GUN by the way.

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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:iconhirmione123:
Hirmione123 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is pretty good :)
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AnimePicasso Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Student Writer
Loved it showed allot of feeling
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lolnyny Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
I really love that one! Amazing job!
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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the last verse. It seems like you finally realised it is you who has to make the descision to try again.   Good to have friends who can slap sense into you :) They are the best.
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thinkpink99 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aye captain:)
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slenderblade Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
I see a fascinating relationship between a single experience and a universal idea. It's quite heavy.
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AlFangMindSculptor42 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aye Captain! Beautiful writing mate! :D
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Enemv33 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
AYE CAPTAIN! Great poem! I like how he's referring to his drinking habits in the beginning. Now! I'm ready to make us some coin! :ahoy:
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your poem caught my eye on the DA main page. :3
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Nightreign123 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Writer
Nice piece of prose.
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xXSpiritualArtistXx Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aye Captain!

You've done it again. Great work~
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Beatriz13 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Aye Captain!
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Artist
 your vary good at write poems
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:iconrussianbear09:
Russianbear09 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's good to have you back capt'n!
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:iconanimeloverishere:
animeloverishere Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm happy to have you back, captain!
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I love how this is a conversation but with only one side. Awesome
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DanDelAwesome Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
This is more like free-form fiction than verse.
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KagamineLink Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AYE CAP'N *squaaak*
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Forsaken-Blue Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013

Aye Cap'n!

 

Glad to hear you are back on deck, by the way ^_^

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LayaAmaranthi Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ramen. ;)
That is all.
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Vivacia18 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
:tighthug:
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Marl1nde Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist
AYE CAPTAIN
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Professional Writer
My thanks friend ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Marl1nde Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist
no problem
ah, life has its deep points
but after the rain, the sun comes
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ThisLittleBluebird Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;w; I'm sorry Cap'n... Hope ye get yet feet out of the brine and back on the deck soon.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Professional Writer
Tis a long road m'friend, but I plan t' entertain ye every step of the way :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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ThisLittleBluebird Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's good, but yer well-being is more important, don't strain yerself or anything
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Perianth5 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student General Artist
:dummy: The good Captain be back!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Professional Writer
Aye, tis always good t' be back eh ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Perianth5 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student General Artist
:D
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Jasmin98 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
:iconletmehugyouplz:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Professional Writer
Go ahead x'3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Jasmin98 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
OH THANK YOU
:iconbrohugplz:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Professional Writer
Haha *hugs* x'D

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Jasmin98 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
snif sniff T.T
*hugs tightly*
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