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You sit silently, painfully pondering, torn.

Wondering if your nightmares will stop.

You shake as you start awake,

Twisting beneath the covers, eyes flickering.

Panic seizes your heart, bile rising.

You hold it back, barely; panting.

You watch quietly as shadows dance.

Glad for your freedom from dreams.

You turn on your side, sighing,

Believing that your torment is over...

But that is when you realize,

As the ceiling sprouts blooded eyes

And as the walls crumble. That

Your terror has only just begun...

So run little rabbit, run away.

Or it won't be fun, this game we play...




-Siddhartha Chen, 29th May 2014
Fave it if you enjoyed it (^w^)/ I'll do more that way!

Alright, so here's a little something I like to call a six-word series. It's a bit of an extension from a six-word story and it was brought to me by my dear friend :icon7demented:

I realised after seeing his six-word series that it is a format that is both challenging and yet inspiring. Telling a story with a restriction of six words at a time.

I'll add an additional rule to this however. Only the last line doesn't have to follow this format. Why? Because it helps you create more impact and properly finish off the poem!

So do give it a shot, you might like it in the end :'3

-Siddhartha Chen :iconwordofchen:

Mini-Challenge:

Do your own six-word series on any topic. It's quite fun!

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nitrocyborc Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Noice
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darkshadow1024 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow.... this is just beautiful... I almost feel as though I just woke up from a nightmare... (and i never dream/ have nightmares so i actually am always trying to replicate the feeling, so thanks for that)
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Smurfette123 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student Filmographer
This reminds me of the movie House of 1000 Corpses. 
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snowleezard Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Excellent poem, it reads like lyrics to a metal song and and paints a  surreal and creepy picture inception style nightmare. This poem skitters right into favorites folders and makes the items next to it nervous. :)
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly, I'm glad that you enjoyed it ^^

My poetry likes making things nervous

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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amy2544 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
So run little rabbit, run away.

Or it won't be fun, this game we play...

x3 //painting an image in my mind
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Professional Writer
If I'm painting an image, then I'm doing my job right ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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amy2544 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
:painter: hahaha yes you are! You are doing an amazing job at that. :meow:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Professional Writer
Great! x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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Evalnia Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love this, you can really feel the anxiety as you read.
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