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Practice Poem - Poor Little Timmy:

Down into well, poor Timmy fell,
Down he fell into the pits of hell.
Brought into hell by an eldritch spell,
Poor little Timmy who fell down the well.

Alone he cowered and shivered and shook,
He shook for hours, so long it took,
So long it took for him to feel well,
Well enough to explore this hell...

Through pathways littered with scenes most gory;
Most gory indeed was little Timmy's story,
A story of fear and suffering defined,
Poor little Timmy, he ran out of time...

Now then, I think I'll go welcome my little guest...

-Chen Yuan Wen, 14th December 2012
Arrr maties,

I figured that on th' days I don't make official releases, instead I'll just put up some poems that I write while practisin' me skills. These are usually never published, but I figured that more releases are better, so MORE IT IS HYAR HAR!

This one was a little bit of a rhymin' splurge, I wanted t' try and see how long I could run connectin' rhymes without losin' the story. Turns out I had t' end it n three stanzas xD

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

P.S. Sorry fer not replyin' t' many o' you, I've been busy workin' on me e-book stuff xD
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noorelven Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
neat :D
tell the story and bring it to the present :D
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Maj0rMareMolester Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the style you used here and it showed the story perfectly so BRAVO sir :3
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye kindly Chase ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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XxRockFiendxX Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
wahh so creepy and cool!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Professional Writer
Me deepest thanks, glad ye liked it ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

P.S. Sorry fer replyin' after so long, been busy with me e-book which has just been released
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iKestrel Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist
Poor tiny Timmy! 'E don't know what 'it 'im...
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Professional Writer
Aye...poor little Timmy indeed xD

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

P.S. Sorry fer replyin' after so long, been busy with me e-book which has just been released
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ellenah1 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome. Amazing.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Professional Writer
Me two favourite words, thank ye fer enjoyin' this ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

P.S. Sorry fer replyin' after so long, been busy with me e-book which has just been released
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ellenah1 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congrats on the e-book!
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