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Our Word is Sacred:

We have struggled against the chains of fate
We've lived our lives on the edge of hate.
Oppressed by the taunting of the foolish and blind;
It is time we stood and responded in kind.

No more can we sit here, content with our place;
Else by apathy alone we shall be erased!
Our work is like a candle, a small one at best;
It is quickly snuffed by a single breath...

For too long have we accepted, the concept of equality;
Whilst simply accepting the crumbs of poverty.
Our people go unheeded, as madmen and sloths;
The "cultured" eat like kings, while we are fed with broth...

To create these verses, it takes a lot of time;
Have you ever tried putting your thoughts in rhyme?
Have you dealt with the frustration, of grasping at words?
Trust me my friend, it is like hunting for birds...

To put this in a structure, to give poetry a form;
It can take some men from dusk till dawn...
Yet we slave away freely and we beg for a chance;
But all we have earned is a pitiless glance...

Instead we are told to fight for the "bone";
Like ancient gladiators from the city of Rome...
We are told that only one can be free;
And it has to be either you or me...

"No, no more can I stand to simply see literature being trampled..."

-Chen Yuan Wen, 13th May 2012
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AUTHOR'S COMMENT:

I decided that the final piece for Inspiration Week should be about the situation that many literature folk on deviant art face.

It is sad really and I hope that it will improve through my weekly features as I spread awareness of the problem.

I will put up the dedication I owe to the only person to have guess one of the bands of my previous poem, TOMORROW :3

In the mean time, enjoy the song that inspired this piece: [link]

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

OTHER POEMS BY ME:

Wings of Despair - [link]
The Feelings That Linger - [link]
The Lie of Vengeance - [link]
The Farseer - [link]
The Sadist - [link]
Hunting the Witch - [link]

OTHER LITERATURE BY ME:

Knight Run 2 - [link]
Knight Run- [link]
SANGUINE Chapter 1 - 1 - [link]
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~WritingRollingGirl Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love it! ^^
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~Getsuei-san Jul 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This was epic :)

Yeah, I agree, writers on dA have little to no attention by others, frankly I think people are just getting lazy :/. But I think there's hope :), may take a while. I used to hate reading XD
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:iconnowcanneverbeforever:
Beautiful...... You continue to amaze me!
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!ioanaanghel Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so good!!!
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~LucienVox Jun 10, 2012   General Artist
I like this poem! I'm going to look through your gallery when i have more time man you very good!
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!randomlyinspired-21 May 31, 2012  Student Writer
I agree with you on this poem! Yeah writers on dA don't get that much in deviantart compared to image artists like painters and such. And I think it's about time that has to change for the better! :)

Amazing as always! :heart:
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:iconedvalenz:
This poem is awesome!
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
ivb fibvv v yio;itgsdjfsa!!! YES! SIMPLY, YES! :heart: :heart: :heart:
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:iconshiatanni:
This poem make you sound like you're trying to bewitch everyone Captain?
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:iconnoorelven:
Hear hear, the captain calls .. where is the avant guard ? where are the legions ? you little wenches the captain calls the campaign has begun!
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