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My love is utter sickness,
I'll have you obsessed, until you're ruined inside.
And you will crawl and I will have you beg,
I swear I'll become the very voice in your head.

Oh you will suffer and you will sweat,
I will have you lusting for more than you get!

Losing it all, as lose your mind,
You're numb to this pain, so take this pleasure of mine;
Now open it up so you can give me more.
Close up your life and quickly lock up the door.

Or i'll have you spinning with my every touch,
And even when I use you it just won't be enough.
Your body desires and I'm letting it know,
You're already gone before I let you go.

My love is an utter sickness,
I'll teach you to love your very moment of weakness,
I'll teach you to crawl and I will make you beg!
I'll teach you what it's like to be mine in bed.

-Word of Chen, 16th May 2014
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Hello my dear friends,

Tonight I wanted to write something a little more personal. It's about how much of a sick and twisted pervert I am .3.

Seriously, I am KINKY *3*

Ahem, but anyway, that aside. My love has always been sick and destructive, it's never been positive for anyone who gets involved with me (though some people do enjoy that I guess). It made me think of it as a real sickness, a kind of illness that just rips you up and that's the story behind this piece.

Of course, I'll do a proper vocal version of this after I get my microphone (and your ear drums will bleed, horribly! .3.)

Mini-Challenge:

Write about your STYLE of love, not about love itself, but about the way that you love. You already know I'm sick to the core, but what about you?

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:

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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting switch of perspective. Usually you only read about people being destroyed by love. 

Loved the cocky tone if this poem as well. It works very well with the theme of the poem. And kodos for daring to be so open about yourself. 

my kind of love.. Probably denying it is there and be a sarcastic fuck until everybody gives up and run away. And then I will start feeling sorry for myself.

Interesting idea for a poem. Might try it when I get done with my uniwork today
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WafflesThePsychopath Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student General Artist
I would say the way that I love, If I had ever known it.

Lol....I'm alone......

(still gots my family though so it's cool!)

Love your style of poetry!!!!!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Professional Writer
Haha thank you so much, I hope you'll enjoy all the other stuff that comes soon :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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GalacticGlitter Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
xD The shameless sensuality of this poem makes me laugh. The narrator is certainly sure of herself! It is expertly crafted, though a little frightening, to be quite honest.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you for enjoying this piece mate :'3

-Siddhartha Chen :iconwordofchen:
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Lapulta Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's funny, but I do feel the same way as in the poem - although my love isn't kinky or erotic. When I love, I devour that person. I want to know everything about them. I want to accept them and follow them and press them to be their very best. But while doing it, I know I also crush them by hanging to close. I never give them any freedom, and I get frightened that it'll destroy both of us. My love is a vine-like sickness that over time, entangles me and the one I love to asphyxiation. Does that make any sense?

Also, in your mini-challenge, do we get to write poems/short essays about it? //not quite sure what the meaning of 'mini-challenge' entails.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Professional Writer
As long as you keep to the theme of the mini-challenge you can do anything. It has no real rules other than what is written x'D

-Chen :iconwordofchen:
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Lapulta Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Professional Writer
Saw'd it, it was gewd :'3

-Chen :iconwordofchen:
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Lapulta Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Excited Blush Thank youuuuuu~
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Student Writer
Ah gees that's intense u sped up my heart Ehe my mind is the worst
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Professional Writer
Haha, no way, my mind is worser :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Student Writer
Oh no I doubt that Lol sell my friends r honey guys and for a pass time i listen to the few chicks ik read porn and erotica.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Professional Writer
Pffft weaaaak, I can do way way worse x'D But we'll have to continue that conversation in notes =P or on facebook haha!

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Student Writer
K I'll note u
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StellaStarfish Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Well, damn. Not really much I can say about this one without coming offas either perverted or far too sheltered haha ^^;
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Professional Writer
Then say it in a note, I shall not judge! x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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silentangelawaits Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student Artist
wow i gotta admit i loved this writing of yours the rhythm and the way its was written very descriptive and in depth too it kind of reminds me of something i wrote my self called Resistance i spoke about a secret of mine that was like an obsession an sickness even that i cant help but do now i am ashamed of it yet i still do it. Anyway not really the exact same thing you have done rlly but yh i like this piece of work of yours its really well written an i can tell that it was not rushed or anything like that the time was put into it. ^^
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Haha, thanks for enjoying it my friend ^^

And don't worry, everyone has their own obsession x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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silentangelawaits Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Artist
npz ur very welcome ^^ and thats true XD hmm I may become a watcher because im interested to see what else you write.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Professional Writer
You can look forward to plenty then ^^

-Siddhartha Chen :iconwordofchen:
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silentangelawaits Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Artist
YAY! :)
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TheThirteenSpades Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this poem is very powerful, I must say, would you mind if I give your challenge to write my style of "love" a go?
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Writer
No worries, my mini-challenge is open to EVERYONE!

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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Shirouyumi81 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
That's how I feel.. Nice words!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Nice :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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Shirouyumi81 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
No prob
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qgrg Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
this sounds like it could be a Marilyn Manson song. Great Job!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Writer
It actually could be, I used the base beat from that Eurythmics song - Sweet Dreams are Made of This and just altered the beat to fit my own style creating a long dragged out verse instead ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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R1L3Y-G4m3r Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
I like it.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Thanks for enjoying it!

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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R1L3Y-G4m3r Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
It's cool
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Aliyari Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think you just voiced my OC so perfectly it's scary. Loved the piece a lot, I must now go and look through some of your other things~ 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Ohohoho, please do, and thank you for enjoying this piece ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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TheScripter Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student General Artist
This is sick...in a good way. Amazing can't wait to hear it spoken.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Yeah me neither, goin' shoppin' tomorrow for the mic and stuff ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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TheScripter Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Sweet :)
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ButterflyAnaes Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Definitely giving this a go. :D
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Great! :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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LeucisticCrow Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmm you wrote this about love, but this read for me like an addiction... very powerfully written.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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girl432 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
I love it I want to be loved like that one day. Heart 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Yeah, unfortunately, it's hard to find partners for that sort of thing .3.

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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CameronFedora Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student General Artist
Actually very interesting. Thanks for opening up.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Writer
No worries, glad you liked it :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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NanaThatha Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student General Artist
this is really GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is so true!!!good job!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Thanks for enjoying it ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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NanaThatha Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Hug 
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ThisLittleBluebird Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaaah wow this is so good *u*
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank ye kindly :'3 Glad you enjoyed it haha

-Siddy Kitty :iconwordofchen:
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