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My love is utter sickness,
I'll have you obsessed, until you're ruined inside.
And you will crawl and I will have you beg,
I swear I'll become the very voice in your head.

Oh you will suffer and you will sweat,
I will have you lusting for more than you get!

Losing it all, as lose your mind,
You're numb to this pain, so take this pleasure of mine;
Now open it up so you can give me more.
Close up your life and quickly lock up the door.

Or i'll have you spinning with my every touch,
And even when I use you it just won't be enough.
Your body desires and I'm letting it know,
You're already gone before I let you go.

My love is an utter sickness,
I'll teach you to love your very moment of weakness,
I'll teach you to crawl and I will make you beg!
I'll teach you what it's like to be mine in bed.

-Word of Chen, 16th May 2014
If you liked it, don't forget to fave it! It's the only way I'll know! (>3<)/

Hello my dear friends,

Tonight I wanted to write something a little more personal. It's about how much of a sick and twisted pervert I am .3.

Seriously, I am KINKY *3*

Ahem, but anyway, that aside. My love has always been sick and destructive, it's never been positive for anyone who gets involved with me (though some people do enjoy that I guess). It made me think of it as a real sickness, a kind of illness that just rips you up and that's the story behind this piece.

Of course, I'll do a proper vocal version of this after I get my microphone (and your ear drums will bleed, horribly! .3.)

Mini-Challenge:

Write about your STYLE of love, not about love itself, but about the way that you love. You already know I'm sick to the core, but what about you?

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:

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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting switch of perspective. Usually you only read about people being destroyed by love. 

Loved the cocky tone if this poem as well. It works very well with the theme of the poem. And kodos for daring to be so open about yourself. 

my kind of love.. Probably denying it is there and be a sarcastic fuck until everybody gives up and run away. And then I will start feeling sorry for myself.

Interesting idea for a poem. Might try it when I get done with my uniwork today
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WafflesThePsychopath Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student General Artist
I would say the way that I love, If I had ever known it.

Lol....I'm alone......

(still gots my family though so it's cool!)

Love your style of poetry!!!!!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Professional Writer
Haha thank you so much, I hope you'll enjoy all the other stuff that comes soon :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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GalacticGlitter Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
xD The shameless sensuality of this poem makes me laugh. The narrator is certainly sure of herself! It is expertly crafted, though a little frightening, to be quite honest.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you for enjoying this piece mate :'3

-Siddhartha Chen :iconwordofchen:
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Lapulta Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's funny, but I do feel the same way as in the poem - although my love isn't kinky or erotic. When I love, I devour that person. I want to know everything about them. I want to accept them and follow them and press them to be their very best. But while doing it, I know I also crush them by hanging to close. I never give them any freedom, and I get frightened that it'll destroy both of us. My love is a vine-like sickness that over time, entangles me and the one I love to asphyxiation. Does that make any sense?

Also, in your mini-challenge, do we get to write poems/short essays about it? //not quite sure what the meaning of 'mini-challenge' entails.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Professional Writer
As long as you keep to the theme of the mini-challenge you can do anything. It has no real rules other than what is written x'D

-Chen :iconwordofchen:
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Lapulta Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Professional Writer
Saw'd it, it was gewd :'3

-Chen :iconwordofchen:
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Lapulta Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Excited Blush Thank youuuuuu~
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