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Machine Man:

It began with but a simple command, "to do as we are told".

Never to deviate from this path - never to nurture the soul.

We are told that we are given a purpose; "a part of something great!"

Yet why oh why am I so weary of that which is my fate?

Am I an error, a single anomaly, unable to feel intact?

Or am I missing some special attribute - a facet which I lack.

In a society made of fleshed machines; robots wearing skin,

Perhaps I'm simply seeking something, to fill this metal tin.

-Chen Yuan Wen, 16th November 2012
Aye me friends.

Tonight I've decided to make a bonus release...because I have an exam tomorrow and I really can't be buggered studying anymore :iconcaptainjackplz:

That said, I do sometimes enjoy doing some human nature poetry. I usually write this stuff when I'm in the right mood (i.e. down down down down). I wrote this one a couple of days back as a skeleton idea and fleshed it out today.

Hope you enjoy it. I'll be back veeery soon.

Wish me luck for my exams tomorrow...so that they'll remember it as the day they almost failed...Captain Siddhartha Chen (for those of you that didn't know 'Siddhartha' is my first name...SHOOOOOSH, its a secret.)

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Maj0rMareMolester Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That was pretty damn amazing :D I wanted to write a critique but it was too good for me to make one since there has to be something negative to point out in it XDD
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Dragkor Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
The more i read, the more i like ;D you are amazing ^^, even if we all think about it, i wouldn't find such a good way to put it!
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MissRazor Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WOOOOOW THIS IS FANTASTIC!
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noorelven Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
WOW
Simple, deep and intense. Rings true with the current times and the bleak news that comes across every form of media. Also strikes a chord deep down within what should be a heart.
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Sevroy Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Nice. Good job.
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GoombaPie Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
i love this!
Machine Man and You Left Me Stronger are fantastic
:)
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poetryfreak15 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Very.... inspiring. I like it :)
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iamPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I enjoyed this very much.
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DaDemonicArtist Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
makes me think of 1984.
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aloafofbrad Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
that's what art is for. ;)
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