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Looking To The Sky:

Sweet yearning from the depths of my soul.

Blessed is my mind that drinks of this knowledge.

Though stubborn at first, rejecting its hand.

I have learned to accept it as my only salvation.

From the streets which have long been my home.

I look to the skies and the clouds above.

Through my skills I shall rise, so I may catch the stars.

Even if the journey might be as heavy as stone.

-Chen Yuan Wen, 16th September 2013, posted by Co-Captain Hayes
:iconanandalyons: 5 mins of wisdom from the Captain. :iconohyoucasplz: He's flying home tomorrow, wish him luck and of course, let him know what you think of this~ :icondesucheeksplz:
-Co-Captain Hayes
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TernadoG Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing & very motivational. This speaks to me.
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KurlyKrazyKat Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Woah...this is marvelous! Amazing! After reading it three times I finally get it! (I'm a little slow...) So beautiful! Phenomenal job!
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BellaGBear Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I have read this one several times now (so no 5 min of wisdom:P ) and I finally understand it! You have a very complex way of writing that still is completely right. In this poem you use a carefull way of expressing things which I like. It makes the meaning of it even deeper in my opinion.

Will for a certainty use this one as inspiration when I feel down again
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BellaGBear Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was pondering upon your poem and the part about catching stars and such reminded me really of this artist: www.youtube.com/watch?v=GM-nFK…

She has a certain lightness and humour to her work that makes her very awesome
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BeSevere Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful
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animeloverishere Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So awesome! The last sentence was wow!
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Russianbear09 Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful and motivational. *pats you on back* good job!
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Enemv33 Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So uplifting! well done!
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Lowenaaa Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautiful >< I love this one !
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