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Lilith My Queen:

In darkness she called me
My life she did bind.
Lilith my Queen;
My soul was consigned...

By blood we were sealed
By hatred defined!
We killed in her name
For this angel of mine.

Her wings were the darkest
They bore chains of steel.
Through darkness my wounds
And my scars she did heal.

In nightmares she whispered
They broke me in time.
She tore out my heart
And ripped out my mind.

All through the black winter
This one frosted night
The heavens did weep
For the death of the light...

-Chen Yuan Wen, 10th March 2012
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Arrr maties, please feel free ta do one of the above (or all of the above if you like me enough). It's helping me in my career ^^

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Arrr maties, t'day I've decided to do a poem about Lilith. A figure of darkness and dread, she is a queen of evil and hence I have portrayed her as such.

The dark beauty, who took my soul away...

-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate :iconcaptainjackplz:

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CephiraForest Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Darkly enticing. Really draws you in. Love it XD
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VLADMV Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
Great...
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redmanna Featured By Owner May 6, 2012
This is a really nice poem. Lilith was portrayed as the queen of evil; although, she gives life, as she offers death. It is unfortunate that there are those who portray good as evil; in order to conceal their own jealous intentions...
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr thank ye and I'm glad ye enjoyed it ^^. There are many sides to things in our worlds, but often individuals get fixated :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

P.S. Sorry for the late reply, I'm slowly clearing messages ^^;
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SamuelFuery Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very beautiful and powerful, sir. Well written!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Professional Writer
Arrr thank ye so much for reading and enjoying me works ^^. I'm glad ye liked it =D

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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SamuelFuery Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem~ ^^
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Gabriel-Clerens Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"in sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came,
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name..."
The first thing to pop in my mind while reading this.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Bwahaha, really? Phantom of the Opera eh? I didn't think this was ANYTHING close O_O.

But wow, glad to know you liked it ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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o0SHeeP0o Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
ooh..... but i have a story too :D (big mouth me)
when i was in primary school, i meaninglessly had hatred for anyone, for any apparent reason. maybe because i was just picky, anyway, i had visions in my head that i was walking up the stairs, i haven't even reached yet, and going into classrooms one by one and beautifully killing everyone, but after that, instead of being disturbed, my mind was cleansed, an after that my hatred for a lot died down, because there is no need to 'kill' them twice.

so i would not say that my visions were bad or good, the effect would be generally good, but the process was generally dangerous, but... that is how SHeeP became bouncy :D

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