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Perhaps I should confess to you,
That I am trapped within this box of crushing insecurity...
Screaming as I shatter my nails against the wall.

But I'm sure you'll tell me to just smile and wave.



Bluh, shot-glass poem tonight. Still no recordin' equipment. I should get a new set on friday.

All that combined with the lack of a proper job...is givin' me the shrieks! (Yes I said shrieks, I go mad when I'm stressed x'D)

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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bunocerous Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sounds like someone with depression/anxiety versus someone who won't believe them or just doesn't want to see. Or maybe that the person screaming is only screaming on the inside, while afraid of what would happen if they actually said something. Either way, I love it.
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DayLightenedDark Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice work! :D I could really see and feel the imagery. It has a powerful impact, too. I think the poem is true, sadly, for some people.
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw I can relate to that (though I'm telling myself to just smile and wave then mostly). Well written and hit the point.
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Sweetannared Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
This is awesome! Great work!
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onefourthree637 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
Short but to the point. I love it
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PippinTook95 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful!
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Terumi670 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very little words but so much meaning
Beautiful
:)
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Forsaken-Blue Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
Been there. Great little poem :) Hope everything gets better for you :)
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Meerkat001 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I know that feel.
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AngelsSolace Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Great concept! :)
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