Just Pull the Trigger

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Hi everyone,

Here is another piece of poetry from me. This time, I think it's finally good enough for a group submission, so I'll be submitting to all the groups I joined before.

As for the poem itself, I wanted to do something where I mixed clean vocals with heavy parts. The underlying theme is of course, SUICIDE, of course I wanted to do something that hinted at it rather than talking outright about the act itself.

How to read this?:
If you want to sing it, the proper rhythm is:

This pain-I feel-Inside
It comes from no wounds.

For the first part, pause after every two words, for the second part, you sing fast. You should be able to get the rhythm after that.

The italics are sung in pure clean vocals, bolds in growls, normal font is sung with a mix of clean vocals and growls wherever you deem appropriate. Repeat the last two verses once if you're singing, because that'll help it feel like the song has ended.

Of course, I'll do a proper vocal version of this after I get my microphone (and your ear drums will bleed!)

If you liked it, don't forget to fave it!

Mini-Challenge:

Do a piece that deals with the topic of suicide, however you cannot in your poem make an actual reference to the death of the reader, the subject, or the individual committing the act. Ready? Give it a shot!

-Chenbeard the Pirate

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