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Babe I know this ain't going to be poetic or nothing,
But y'know I just have a need to express my feelings:

*Excessive throat clearing*

Roses be red and them violets be blue,
I'm the only Asian kid in the ghetto;
What's up wit chu?

You lookin' at me like, damn you're fine!
Babe you know you blow my mind.

I may not be tall,
But my height is just right.
I'mma sleep on yo chest,
When you get cold at night.

And if yo boyfriend is big,
Then I'mma run right now.
Cause, I don't wanna look like my face is DOG CHOW,
yanawhatImean?

So uh, I'm losin' my train of thought,
I think this is all I got.
Babe I think you're hot,
Gimme yo number, uh, before you get shot.

Please?
Just something done for fun x'D I mean I've been doing nothing but serious topics recently, I figure I should throw in some humour ^^

Forgot to link the audio - soundcloud.com/siddhartha-chen…

Have fun laughing :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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:iconaisuruthewolf1:
AisuruTheWolf1 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
That's hilarious XD
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amy2544 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Llama Emoji-01 (Laughing) [V1] whoop go Asians!
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Vivacia18 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
:XD:
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themeepynerd Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is the best thing I have ever read
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Dragkor Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Went camping and returned and saw 2 of your poems, the first was the "…" (it was first on my deviant watch list, even if it it's newer) which almost made me cry (almost, must be strong!).
Then… This is awesome :D (glad it's always like that)
The boy is quite insecure but at the same time goes straight to the point.
I wish that the way of the humour is always with you!
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Amylee23 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014   Artist
lol awesome
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StellaStarfish Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Student General Artist
I listened to one of your other poems and it was all dark and demonic, and then all of a asudden this popped up and I didn't realize it had changed because the volume was really low and then all of a sudden it's like... I dunnoan, it was surreal :D
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Sorrowscoldfrost Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
Lol, this was great!
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DatCloudKat Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The only Asian, eh? It's a humorous poem with meaning in it, and that's something I love about it. If you read it once, you laugh, but if you read it several times you see the depth inside it. Keep on writing!
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reycie311 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg I love this. Will you marry me? xD
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Let's start as friends first eh? x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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:iconreycie311:
reycie311 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol sure. Yaaaaayyyyyy!
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badger94 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
Too funny that how to get a girl notice you hahaha dud.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Professional Writer
That's ALWAYS how I get a girl to notice me x'D It works when you're the only asian kid in the hood...or in some cases the only asian kid who talks like he's from the hood x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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badger94 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
Too funny dud
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:iconlapulta:
Lapulta Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha. I love the style in this poem. An immediate favorite!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Glad to know you enjoyed it m'dear ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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Ravenwingedgurl Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thats so cute, X) Its also really funny.Good job!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Haha my thanks dear ^^ I truly appreciate you always enjoying my stuff :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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Ravenwingedgurl Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Its kinda hard not to. Your passion for your work makes it all the more fun to read.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Well, gotta have passion when you love something right? :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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Ravenwingedgurl Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yepperdoodles.
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HiiroKage23 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lmao. Nice work ^-^
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Thanks for enjoying ;3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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TheRealAdrikus Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
XD the boyfriend part was funny
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:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Professional Writer
Haha x'D
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Beth-BethTheColorful Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
XD I like it. It's sad how true this is sometimes. 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Professional Writer
Huh? Why is it sad? wut? x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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Beth-BethTheColorful Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
sad as in slightly pathetic. only slightly. that people aren't able to at least have better grammar. I know it was meant to be written that way...but yeah. Nvm my comment. 
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passionatepremise Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student General Artist
omfg
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This made me smile so much ~ :la:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Professional Writer
Haha that's cute x'D

Glad to know I brought a smile ^^
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Nhizyr Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
lmao, this is adorable >u<
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Professional Writer
Glad you enjoyed it =P

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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catbat0001 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 14, 2014
Fine  and mind dont........rhyme. *sticks out tounge*
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Professional Writer
Did you listen to the audio x'D It rhymes really well actually :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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DylanSeto Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student Artist
For some reason this reminds me supa hot fire. :P

www.youtube.com/watch?v=kpSD7H…
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Professional Writer
LOL omg I know that x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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DylanSeto Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student Artist
SIKE -- DATS DA WRONG NUMBA
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marleendekker Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014   Photographer
I really laughed and said it out loud with a weird ghetto voice I made up.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Professional Writer
Haha, there's one provided since I did the audio for it as well ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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nicoxmel Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
It made me smile, but not in a funny way. I believe there must be some truth in it, so I liked it a lot;P
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Professional Writer
Lol well I guess this is how I would hit on girls, but I'd still be playing the humour angle x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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TheEvilOvelords Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
This is so different that I can't find a word to describe it!! XD
But it was fun to read! ^^

-Amy
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Professional Writer
Lol of course ;3 I'm always doing different things :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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TheEvilOvelords Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
And they are awesome different things! :dummy:

-Amy
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Perianth5 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student General Artist
This is very... I'd say cute, but I don't think that'd do it justice... I think realistic and honest covers it more, and it made me smile.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Professional Writer
Lol, just a bit of fun on a saturday night. I did audio for this actually, I just forgot to link it LOL

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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Perianth5 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student General Artist
XD Cool
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