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Babe I know this ain't going to be poetic or nothing,
But y'know I just have a need to express my feelings:

*Excessive throat clearing*

Roses be red and them violets be blue,
I'm the only Asian kid in the ghetto;
What's up wit chu?

You lookin' at me like, damn you're fine!
Babe you know you blow my mind.

I may not be tall,
But my height is just right.
I'mma sleep on yo chest,
When you get cold at night.

And if yo boyfriend is big,
Then I'mma run right now.
Cause, I don't wanna look like my face is DOG CHOW,
yanawhatImean?

So uh, I'm losin' my train of thought,
I think this is all I got.
Babe I think you're hot,
Gimme yo number, uh, before you get shot.

Please?
Just something done for fun x'D I mean I've been doing nothing but serious topics recently, I figure I should throw in some humour ^^

Forgot to link the audio - soundcloud.com/siddhartha-chen…

Have fun laughing :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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AisuruTheWolf1 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
That's hilarious XD
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amy2544 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Llama Emoji-01 (Laughing) [V1] whoop go Asians!
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Vivacia18 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
:XD:
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themeepynerd Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is the best thing I have ever read
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Dragkor Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Went camping and returned and saw 2 of your poems, the first was the "…" (it was first on my deviant watch list, even if it it's newer) which almost made me cry (almost, must be strong!).
Then… This is awesome :D (glad it's always like that)
The boy is quite insecure but at the same time goes straight to the point.
I wish that the way of the humour is always with you!
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Amylee23 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014   Artist
lol awesome
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StellaStarfish Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I listened to one of your other poems and it was all dark and demonic, and then all of a asudden this popped up and I didn't realize it had changed because the volume was really low and then all of a sudden it's like... I dunnoan, it was surreal :D
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Sorrowscoldfrost Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
Lol, this was great!
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DatCloudKat Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The only Asian, eh? It's a humorous poem with meaning in it, and that's something I love about it. If you read it once, you laugh, but if you read it several times you see the depth inside it. Keep on writing!
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reycie311 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg I love this. Will you marry me? xD
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