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Here's a glass of water;
Another pill made just for me.
I'll drink it with my sorrows
And I'll swallow back my plea.

You don't even need to hear me,
I'll be writing it on the wall:
The hope you never gave me,
Is the hope that stands me tall!

And I will walk through this world,
Don't ask me if it's cold.
There is warmth for you to find here;
My hand's for you to hold.

So take it and I promise,
This night won't be your last.
If you stay with me, I swear,
We'll walk beyond the past.

- Chennie, 26th May 2014
If you liked it, don't forget to fave it! It's the only way I'll know! (>3<)/

P.S. Listen to the Audio on my soundcloud: soundcloud.com/siddhartha-chen…

Hey there guys,

Here is my first audio poem. I learned today that I could easily write emotional rap, by using J3T's style of rapping...but sadly I can't actually rap it because my vocals are either suited to Danny's singing or Gangster rap...so I was a little disappointed, but I hope you enjoy the audio anyway ^^

As for what made me write this poem: I guess I've always wanted to do something that was more about HOPE, rather than depression or suicide, because there is always hope. You may not know it yourself, and you may not find it, but it is there :'3 and others will help you ^^.

That's how it has been for me at least :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:


Mini-Challenge (No rules, just mention me/link me so I can see it, challenge open to EVERYONE):

How will you give someone hope? You can write about someone close to you, or even just in general. Sky's the limit ^^

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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very sweet poem. Well done :)
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thenewnatch Featured By Owner May 28, 2014
Its vert good. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly for reading it ^^

-Chen :iconwordofchen:
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rOsso-mimi Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Professional General Artist
This really moved me TT^TT  btw thank you for the mention
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Professional Writer
You're welcome my friend ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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Dreadmaster231 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This gives me an idea for a song...
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Professional Writer
Let me know how that turns out x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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Dreadmaster231 Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Will do!
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JBGamer Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
For your mini challenge:

The future only isn't bright
For those who do not see
The path to walk to get us through the night
And into harmony

So, to all those who would despair
Who say of such a thing's unheard
I'll walk the path to take us there--
Impossible is but a word!
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GilPires Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
Thumbs UP!!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Professional Writer
Not bad, that's pretty good indeed ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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dmh66 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
nice..:)
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Professional Writer
Thanks :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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shimoyaki Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
nice
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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shimoyaki Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
yw!
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MattyXJeevas4blue Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
I love this Heart Your poems r really fantastic! Clap U have talent Meow :3  I will have to look more through ur gallery later on and deviant watch too ^-^
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you, er, Matt right? Haha nice to meet another Aussie x'D

Thanks for reading and watching ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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MattyXJeevas4blue Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
Yep Matty~~ ^-^ lolz, but omgosh ur Australian too! :D I just realised lolz :) And that's ok, I like ur work ^-^
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Professional Writer
Haha yes I am x'D So hai :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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MattyXJeevas4blue Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
Haha ^-^ Meow :3 Hi! 
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BUllyKiller113 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That was beautiful.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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BUllyKiller113 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup:salute: 
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raggedygirl2002 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
Beautiful 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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raggedygirl2002 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
You're so very welcome.
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe!! That's so cheesy cute!!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
thanks :'3 Glad you liked it ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
cheesy is my guilty plesure
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Professional Writer
Lol x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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How2HandleHeartbreak Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice job ^^
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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How2HandleHeartbreak Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Np! ^^
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Mtzpltk1 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice Job! Very well done and filled with such passion...
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly for enjoying it ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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Saga-Sage Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
... Very beautiful... I can relate, in a way.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Glad to hear it my friend :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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myriadwhitedarkness Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This poem is uplifting in a bittersweet way. I love how it speaks of an individual who has borne hardship, but intends only to take his/her experiences and turn them into positivism. 

I am honored by the mention :aww: Thank you so very much for your support!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
You're welcome ^^ Thank you for supporting me as well :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Writer
You would think by now I would realize that if I'm reading epic poetry, there's a 90% probability that it was written by you. And this could make for a good anime opening/ending, I swear...
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Haha, thank you so much for that amazing compliment. I'm really glad to know that you enjoy my works that much x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Writer
You're welcome! :XD:
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DylanSeto Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Artist
The recording kind of sounds like the voice actor for Zuko in Avatar The Last Airbender, Dante Basco. It's interesting because Dante is also a Spoken Word poet. XD

Good work~
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
This just made my day LOL I never knew I could sound like Zuko x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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DylanSeto Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Artist
Zuko can get down. XD

 www.youtube.com/watch?v=nyUf12…
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Holy shit, I think I found a good style to work with!

My voice is a little harder as you'll hear in the more humourous gangsta raps, but wow!

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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DylanSeto Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Artist
You're quite welcome c:

I'll look forward to it. :P
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silentangelawaits Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Artist
love it keep up the good work ^^ 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you :'3 I'll definitely keep it up ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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