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Here's a glass of water;
Another pill made just for me.
I'll drink it with my sorrows
And I'll swallow back my plea.

You don't even need to hear me,
I'll be writing it on the wall:
The hope you never gave me,
Is the hope that stands me tall!

And I will walk through this world,
Don't ask me if it's cold.
There is warmth for you to find here;
My hand's for you to hold.

So take it and I promise,
This night won't be your last.
If you stay with me, I swear,
We'll walk beyond the past.

- Chennie, 26th May 2014
If you liked it, don't forget to fave it! It's the only way I'll know! (>3<)/

P.S. Listen to the Audio on my soundcloud: soundcloud.com/siddhartha-chen…

Hey there guys,

Here is my first audio poem. I learned today that I could easily write emotional rap, by using J3T's style of rapping...but sadly I can't actually rap it because my vocals are either suited to Danny's singing or Gangster rap...so I was a little disappointed, but I hope you enjoy the audio anyway ^^

As for what made me write this poem: I guess I've always wanted to do something that was more about HOPE, rather than depression or suicide, because there is always hope. You may not know it yourself, and you may not find it, but it is there :'3 and others will help you ^^.

That's how it has been for me at least :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:


Mini-Challenge (No rules, just mention me/link me so I can see it, challenge open to EVERYONE):

How will you give someone hope? You can write about someone close to you, or even just in general. Sky's the limit ^^

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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very sweet poem. Well done :)
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thenewnatch Featured By Owner May 28, 2014
Its vert good. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly for reading it ^^

-Chen :iconwordofchen:
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rOsso-mimi Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Professional General Artist
This really moved me TT^TT  btw thank you for the mention
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Professional Writer
You're welcome my friend ^^

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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Dreadmaster231 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This gives me an idea for a song...
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Professional Writer
Let me know how that turns out x'D

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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Dreadmaster231 Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Will do!
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JBGamer Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
For your mini challenge:

The future only isn't bright
For those who do not see
The path to walk to get us through the night
And into harmony

So, to all those who would despair
Who say of such a thing's unheard
I'll walk the path to take us there--
Impossible is but a word!
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GilPires Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
Thumbs UP!!
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