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If you tell me you're fine,
Then I won't question it.

I won't ask you about the cuts,
Or the bruises.

I'll turn a blind eye to everything...

Instead I'll ask that you join me tonight,
And maybe we'll cook ourselves a little supper.

Maybe you'd like to stay over? It'd be cool!
We'll watch a movie, play a few games.

C'mon you know how much I suck at monster hunter,
Be my wingman--er, lady tonight

And in the morning, let's go for a walk,
There's a huge park just a short distance away.

We could go on one of those nature trail things!
Hell yeah? Hell yeah!

And maybe, after you've had some time to think,
You'll see that things ain't quite as bad as you thought.

And if one day isn't enough to convince you,
Then I'm going to try again tomorrow.

Hell yeah? Hell yeah!


Piece four of the creative rush.

I see a lot of people doing the 'I'm fine' type of poems, but I wanted to try something a little more encouraging than that.

Follow me on facebook if you like: www.facebook.com/WordOfChen

And I am off into a world of wheeeee x'D

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Student Writer
Aeeh would bring so much joy to those in need I tink it's beautiful I'm glad u wrote it
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thanks m'dear ^^

-Chen :iconwordofchen:
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Writer
My pleasure
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Bboy-Theory Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Makes me feel so much better that there are people like you out there :) I spend lots of time thinking like this towards others, hoping that i could really turn their "I'm fine" into reality. You deserve a fav :D
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thanks :'3 although this reply is like 7 months late x'D

-Chen :iconwordofchen:
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cazer112 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"i'm fine" or "i'm ok" two biggest lies on the planet most of the time
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Yup, you're right about that

-Chen :iconwordofchen:

P.S. Sorry about my reply like 7 months later
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GlassMuses Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
This just makes my soul feel a little lighter. Thanks for this, Cap'n. A friend like the narrator would be the best kind.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Ohoho, so you've been a long-time fan of my work :3

-Chen :iconwordofchen:

P.S. I'm replying like 8 months late, I'm sorry .3.
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GlassMuses Featured By Owner May 28, 2014
Ever since "White Lily Girl" -- which inspired one of my best pieces, in fact. Too scared to show it online. But I've always liked this unique spin you tend to put on things, like the piece about Pokemon. And your darkness makes me lick my lips! And it just happened that this piece struck a tired, needing chord in me at just the right time. Funny, you've been doing that lately, too. Thanks, Cap'n. *salutes*
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Professional Writer
Well glad to inspire you in that way ^^

-Chen :iconwordofchen:
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Solyme Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
Lovely. I like how the 'll turn a blind eye to everything , just after the first 4 verses, sounds almost heartless, until the reader realizes it's not indifference, but caring.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly ^^ I'm glad you saw that

-Chen :iconwordofchen:

P.S. So sorry this is like an 8 month late reply
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Crystal-Magic13 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

That is probably one of the best ways I've heard of,

to handle a friend with depression. That was amazing.

Thank you.

 

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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you for reading it ^^

-Chen :iconwordofchen:

P.S. So sorry this is like an 8 month late reply
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
Amazing. There should be more people thinking this way.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
I agree with that ^^

-Chen :iconwordofchen:

P.S. So sorry this is like an 8 month late reply
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:)
It's OK.
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StellaStarfish Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Student General Artist
WHY AREN'T THERE MORE GUYS LIKE YOU?! *sobs in s corner*
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
...Because I'm twisted and a super pervert .3.

-Chen :iconwordofchen:

P.S. So sorry this is like an 8 month late reply
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StellaStarfish Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Hahaha no worries ^_^
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lastleaf4ever Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
so touching. i love this. so delicately thought of and so comforting. 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you so much  ^^

-Chen :iconwordofchen:

P.S. So sorry this is like an 8 month late reply
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ManicPixieNightmares Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student General Artist
amazing
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you ^^

-Chen :iconwordofchen:

P.S. So sorry this is like an 8 month late reply
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I love this. Sometimes little things like that can make all the difference.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thanks so much :3

-Chen :iconwordofchen:

P.S. So sorry this is like an 8 month late reply
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome! And that's ok, haha :)
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CasualSketch Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This captures, perfectly, the way we should support our friends whenever they need us. Awesome word :D
Also, monster hunter...nice :) 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Professional Writer
Haha I do like me monster hunter ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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damnheliotrope Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Wow you gave me goosebumps<3
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye kindly fer enjoyin' it :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Retremeko Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
(TAT) So Sweet
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Professional Writer
Haha my thanks :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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beanieboot Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
aw i like it :)
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Professional Writer
Thumbs up ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Jezz1276 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh, this gave me shudders...
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Professional Writer
Well then, guess I did me job well :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Jezz1276 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
You did! It is really good :)
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HarryRooden Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is amazing! I love it! I think it really tells a story, but in a very simple way. Good job. :D
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Professional Writer
Me thanks :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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HarryRooden Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome :D
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FreeSpirit69 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this so much.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Professional Writer
Glad t' know ye liked it friend ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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life-scape Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Student General Artist
So wonderful; it's written so enchantingly, and I love the meaning behind it~ :squee:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Professional Writer
Haha glad t' hear that :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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AmyNChan Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is awesome!!!  *^_^*
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye kindly ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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AmyNChan Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob.  *^_^*
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IridescentCatalyst Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
Hehe, awesome!
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