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If you tell me you're fine,
Then I won't question it.

I won't ask you about the cuts,
Or the bruises.

I'll turn a blind eye to everything...

Instead I'll ask that you join me tonight,
And maybe we'll cook ourselves a little supper.

Maybe you'd like to stay over? It'd be cool!
We'll watch a movie, play a few games.

C'mon you know how much I suck at monster hunter,
Be my wingman--er, lady tonight

And in the morning, let's go for a walk,
There's a huge park just a short distance away.

We could go on one of those nature trail things!
Hell yeah? Hell yeah!

And maybe, after you've had some time to think,
You'll see that things ain't quite as bad as you thought.

And if one day isn't enough to convince you,
Then I'm going to try again tomorrow.

Hell yeah? Hell yeah!


Piece four of the creative rush.

I see a lot of people doing the 'I'm fine' type of poems, but I wanted to try something a little more encouraging than that.

Follow me on facebook if you like: www.facebook.com/WordOfChen

And I am off into a world of wheeeee x'D

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aeeh would bring so much joy to those in need I tink it's beautiful I'm glad u wrote it
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thanks m'dear ^^

-Chen :iconwordofchen:
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure
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Bboy-Theory Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Makes me feel so much better that there are people like you out there :) I spend lots of time thinking like this towards others, hoping that i could really turn their "I'm fine" into reality. You deserve a fav :D
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Thanks :'3 although this reply is like 7 months late x'D

-Chen :iconwordofchen:
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cazer112 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"i'm fine" or "i'm ok" two biggest lies on the planet most of the time
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Yup, you're right about that

-Chen :iconwordofchen:

P.S. Sorry about my reply like 7 months later
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GlassMuses Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
This just makes my soul feel a little lighter. Thanks for this, Cap'n. A friend like the narrator would be the best kind.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
Ohoho, so you've been a long-time fan of my work :3

-Chen :iconwordofchen:

P.S. I'm replying like 8 months late, I'm sorry .3.
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GlassMuses Featured By Owner May 28, 2014
Ever since "White Lily Girl" -- which inspired one of my best pieces, in fact. Too scared to show it online. But I've always liked this unique spin you tend to put on things, like the piece about Pokemon. And your darkness makes me lick my lips! And it just happened that this piece struck a tired, needing chord in me at just the right time. Funny, you've been doing that lately, too. Thanks, Cap'n. *salutes*
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