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If you tell me you're fine,
Then I won't question it.

I won't ask you about the cuts,
Or the bruises.

I'll turn a blind eye to everything...

Instead I'll ask that you join me tonight,
And maybe we'll cook ourselves a little supper.

Maybe you'd like to stay over? It'd be cool!
We'll watch a movie, play a few games.

C'mon you know how much I suck at monster hunter,
Be my wingman--er, lady tonight

And in the morning, let's go for a walk,
There's a huge park just a short distance away.

We could go on one of those nature trail things!
Hell yeah? Hell yeah!

And maybe, after you've had some time to think,
You'll see that things ain't quite as bad as you thought.

And if one day isn't enough to convince you,
Then I'm going to try again tomorrow.

Hell yeah? Hell yeah!


Piece four of the creative rush.

I see a lot of people doing the 'I'm fine' type of poems, but I wanted to try something a little more encouraging than that.

Follow me on facebook if you like: www.facebook.com/WordOfChen

And I am off into a world of wheeeee x'D

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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:iconbboy-theory:
Makes me feel so much better that there are people like you out there :) I spend lots of time thinking like this towards others, hoping that i could really turn their "I'm fine" into reality. You deserve a fav :D
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:iconcazer112:
"i'm fine" or "i'm ok" two biggest lies on the planet most of the time
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:iconglassmuses:
This just makes my soul feel a little lighter. Thanks for this, Cap'n. A friend like the narrator would be the best kind.
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:iconsolyme:
Lovely. I like how the 'll turn a blind eye to everything , just after the first 4 verses, sounds almost heartless, until the reader realizes it's not indifference, but caring.
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Crystal-Magic13 Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

That is probably one of the best ways I've heard of,

to handle a friend with depression. That was amazing.

Thank you.

 

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:iconkillerlord123:
Amazing. There should be more people thinking this way.
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StellaStarfish Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHY AREN'T THERE MORE GUYS LIKE YOU?! *sobs in s corner*
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lastleaf4ever Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
so touching. i love this. so delicately thought of and so comforting. 
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Czechmix-sempai Oct 5, 2013  Student General Artist
amazing
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snowywolf13 Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I love this. Sometimes little things like that can make all the difference.
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