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But I am getting quite sick of your attitude.

And if you think you are free of all guilt and suspicion.

I'm afraid, you will find, you are only in remission...

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For I'll hunt you quietly, silent and slow.

And I'll wait till you slip, before I lay you low.

But when you're filled to the brim with fear; chasing the shadows away.

I'll appear inside your mirror--and I might come out to play...

...So tell me, do you fear me now?



-Chen Yuan Wen, 16th December 2013
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One thing that I've always hated, are people that believe they can get away with anything. I've met some of them and I've always kept things quiet. Because I do not like to hunt someone out in the open. I like to wait for my chance, observing them, watching them. Metaphorically stroking their hair while they sleep, with a knife just inches from their throat.

And at first they'll be confident, but then they'll start jumping at shadows and when they finally decide to confess of their own free will. You slam the knife in and twist it hard. 

After that, feel free to ask: why so serious son? :iconjokerplz:

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ThePrincessesOfDeath Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice I would send a lot of people this poetry Big Fool Emoji-24 (No words) [V4] Dealwithitcatplz 
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curiousBlueRose Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Student Writer
Awesooome!
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dantesdisciple9 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this makes me happy :)
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Design-Me-Bad Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You just creeped me out yes?

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XxshadowzheartxX Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
2 lzy to reed lol read soryh 
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9blueTurtles Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
It's only 8 stanzas long, HOW DO YOU FUNCTION AS A HUMAN BEING IF YOU CAN'T READ 8 FRICKING STANZAS.
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HiiroKage23 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great writings. You deserve the favorite. It calls to my dark side. :iconevilsmileplz:
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I love the end.
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nikutsuki Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
Faving this, because I love it, and I can relate ; v ;
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PossumFan Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Woah... Love this one.

+ fave
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