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Her Cold Lips:

She watches me, as I bid my friends goodbye
Her cold hands creep along my shoulders
they tell me that she is there
and that she will never let me go...

We're in my room now, away from the outside
I know that she doesn't like the sun
Often, she prefers to observe me from the shadows
but I think she doesn't like the others coming close...

We're beneath the covers now, panting softly
her cold body pressed against mine
Her lips are completely devoid of warmth
and yet they taste so rousingly sweet

A haunting, a haunter and the haunted
Two of us now entwined beneath the ruffled sheets
We cross a barrier that should not be broken
each and every night, as her softly tongue slips gently over mine...

It's dark now and she continues to smile
Her chest does not rise and fall, for she does not breathe
She suffocates me and yet I can't bear to let her go
She clings to me and yet I am equally drawn

It's daytime now and she has vanished
but I know she will return when the sun has gone
Though her lips and tongue remain forever cold to me
they fill my heart with a soothing warmth...

"Tell me oh lord, is it so wrong to love a ghost?"

-Chen Yuan Wen, August 18th 2012
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Just an experimental piece, workin' with more sensual scenes. Could use some fine tuning, but that's why tha Captain was practisin' with this.

Modified tha author's tagline in tha poetry so that it fits with Chen's old pieces. The captain is still ultra busy unfortunately, but that's how it is bein' a third year xD.

-Co-captain Hayes :iconlugialuvr13:
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*darkheroic Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
you're a good writer.. nice
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*WordOfChen Oct 18, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you for enjoying my work ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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*darkheroic Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
my pleasure :D
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*WordOfChen Oct 18, 2012  Professional Writer
Pleasure is all mine, my friend ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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:iconmyennaius13:
This could almost be you writing about my problem with letting my ex go. Where oh great writer of poems do'est thou come up with such fantastic works to bend and yet sooth the aching mind?
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*WordOfChen Oct 18, 2012  Professional Writer
Hmmm, from the depths of my mind usually xD I've been requested this week to talk about how I come up with my poems xD

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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:iconmyennaius13:
I've been writing something myself for a while now, and in the cases of what I might consider genius works (forgive the moment of ego, but I'm also including what you wrote here in this thought) often come from the opposite end of one's anatomy; namely right from the most foul smelling depths of one's self (this comment is meant in a joking manner, just in case it isn't obvious).
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=Azedarach Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy, that was great.
Gives me so many ideas.
Tell me, have you ever written a novel?
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*WordOfChen Oct 18, 2012  Professional Writer
I probably won't write a novel until I sell a few mini e-books first ^^

Thank you for enjoying my work though

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

P.S. This reply is like a month late xD...man that awkward moment when the artist takes one month to reply to people .____. :iconotlplz:
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~Hazyl Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing. I love the eeriness of the piece. You can really feel the emotions.
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