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December 18, 2013
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I don't know when it started.
When I'd gone a little off.
When my mind had gotten twisted,
And bubbled like a broth.

I don't know when it happened,
When I'd gone a little green.
When I'd turned a little rotten;
And dreamed a rotten dream.

And I don't know why it happened,
But this I know to say;
Twenty-two are buried here,
But twenty-three today...

...Now then, why don't we find some place nice and quiet (^_^)

- Chen Yuan Wen, Broken World Series, 19th December 2013

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Author's Comment:

Alright so this piece sort of deals with that aspect of creepy murder and I wanted to pt it in rhyme because...a person who is just WEIRD, often likes to find cute ways...of doing evil things.

This is an expression of that and although I am really tired after work today, you guys broke the limit for the previous poem, so I'm delivering this one as promised, within 1 to 2 days.

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ThePrincessesOfDeath Mar 6, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Super sweet I think this is my new favorite poem Troll 
KeanKennedy Dec 29, 2013   General Artist
haha this is awesome! :D
I didn't get if before reading descript, but I really like it! Wonderful.
Ally-RedTulip Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, that's so beautiful!
SweetNikky12 Dec 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist

SweetNikky12 Dec 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
That's so touching!Really Sad 
shadowjade14 Dec 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
OMG! beautiful!
Hmm, as a lover of cute evil things, mayhap I should be concerned about my personality:XD:
Geobukseon Dec 18, 2013  Student Writer
Nice.  Just nice.
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