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December 18, 2013
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I don't know when it started.
When I'd gone a little off.
When my mind had gotten twisted,
And bubbled like a broth.

I don't know when it happened,
When I'd gone a little green.
When I'd turned a little rotten;
And dreamed a rotten dream.

And I don't know why it happened,
But this I know to say;
Twenty-two are buried here,
But twenty-three today...

...Now then, why don't we find some place nice and quiet (^_^)

- Chen Yuan Wen, Broken World Series, 19th December 2013

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Alright so this piece sort of deals with that aspect of creepy murder and I wanted to pt it in rhyme because...a person who is just WEIRD, often likes to find cute ways...of doing evil things.

This is an expression of that and although I am really tired after work today, you guys broke the limit for the previous poem, so I'm delivering this one as promised, within 1 to 2 days.

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noorelven Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
LikI it. But it feels incomplete to me
WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
haha, probably because you liked it so much that the end you needed more x'D

-Chen :iconwordofchen:
candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Perhaps perhaps
luckynr1 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you ^^

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ThePrincessesOfDeath Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Super sweet I think this is my new favorite poem Troll 
KeanKennedy Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013   General Artist
haha this is awesome! :D
DisturbingGreen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
I didn't get if before reading descript, but I really like it! Wonderful.
Ally-RedTulip Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, that's so beautiful!
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