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I don't know when it started.
When I'd gone a little off.
When my mind had gotten twisted,
And bubbled like a broth.


I don't know when it happened,
When I'd gone a little green.
When I'd turned a little rotten;
And dreamed a rotten dream.


And I don't know why it happened,
But this I know to say;
Twenty-two are buried here,
But twenty-three today...



...Now then, why don't we find some place nice and quiet (^_^)




- Chen Yuan Wen, Broken World Series, 19th December 2013


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Alright so this piece sort of deals with that aspect of creepy murder and I wanted to pt it in rhyme because...a person who is just WEIRD, often likes to find cute ways...of doing evil things.

This is an expression of that and although I am really tired after work today, you guys broke the limit for the previous poem, so I'm delivering this one as promised, within 1 to 2 days.

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noorelven Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Cute
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
LikI it. But it feels incomplete to me
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Writer
haha, probably because you liked it so much that the end felt..like you needed more x'D

-Chen :iconwordofchen:
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Perhaps perhaps
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luckynr1 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Beautiful!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you ^^

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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ThePrincessesOfDeath Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Super sweet I think this is my new favorite poem Troll 
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KeanKennedy Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha this is awesome! :D
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DisturbingGreen Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
I didn't get if before reading descript, but I really like it! Wonderful.
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Ally-RedTulip Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, that's so beautiful!
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