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Glove Slap!

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I am a shackled man,
Links from my head to my toes.
Don't even ask how I got them,
Man, I don't even know!

But one thing is very clear to me,
I'll whisper it too...
These aren't here to protect me son,
They're here to protect you!

For if I wasn't chained, 
If I wasn't locked down tight-
I'd have my hands up, 
Taking you on as my next fight.

'Cause all I know is fighting,
Either fittin' or spittin'
You better take up your stance,
Or I'll be startin' the hittin',

And ain't no chance for quittin'!
No tappin' or the ref stop.
Because it's time to teach you,
How we really do hip-hop!

-Chennie, 12th May 2014
Alright everyone,

Here's another rap I composed, however this one should be rapped with a British accent. Are you up for the challenge? I will also be rapping it in that accent once I get a microphone :iconohmygodplz: 

As for WHAT I was actually writing about. I noticed that after coming back, not only did I receive a TON of positive encouragement, but some people did mention that they want to see something with a little more flavour, soooo here it is. I wrote it as a glove slap to the current hip hop artists who can barely rhyme things at all (or make sense) *cough* lil' wayne *cough* and all they seem to talk about is MONEY. So I am trying to gear my raps more toward the old school style of Eminem, while inserting my own little bits and pieces here and there (as you can see with the british accent). I like the way it turned out :'3

MINI-CHALLENGE:

- Write a poem or a short prose (under 400 words) about something that also makes you angry and show how you're better than the 'industry standard'. You could talk about poetry styles, music etc. As long as you don't attack any specific individuals other than someone known by mainstream media (like lil' wayne).

- Post a link to your piece in the comments, I will read it and fave tomorrow!

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~I still haven't thanked some people who mentioned me before, if you mention me, I'll feature you. Plain and simple ;)
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candygirl101010's avatar
Lol we all have those animalistic sides of us though I try to b a pasafist often