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I am a shackled man,
Links from my head to my toes.
Don't even ask how I got them,
Man, I don't even know!

But one thing is very clear to me,
I'll whisper it too...
These aren't here to protect me son,
They're here to protect you!

For if I wasn't chained, 
If I wasn't locked down tight-
I'd have my hands up, 
Taking you on as my next fight.

'Cause all I know is fighting,
Either fittin' or spittin'
You better take up your stance,
Or I'll be startin' the hittin',

And ain't no chance for quittin'!
No tappin' or the ref stop.
Because it's time to teach you,
How we really do hip-hop!

-Chennie, 12th May 2014
Alright everyone,

Here's another rap I composed, however this one should be rapped with a British accent. Are you up for the challenge? I will also be rapping it in that accent once I get a microphone :iconohmygodplz: 

As for WHAT I was actually writing about. I noticed that after coming back, not only did I receive a TON of positive encouragement, but some people did mention that they want to see something with a little more flavour, soooo here it is. I wrote it as a glove slap to the current hip hop artists who can barely rhyme things at all (or make sense) *cough* lil' wayne *cough* and all they seem to talk about is MONEY. So I am trying to gear my raps more toward the old school style of Eminem, while inserting my own little bits and pieces here and there (as you can see with the british accent). I like the way it turned out :'3

MINI-CHALLENGE:

- Write a poem or a short prose (under 400 words) about something that also makes you angry and show how you're better than the 'industry standard'. You could talk about poetry styles, music etc. As long as you don't attack any specific individuals other than someone known by mainstream media (like lil' wayne).

- Post a link to your piece in the comments, I will read it and fave tomorrow!

My Facebook: www.facebook.com/WordOfChen

~I still haven't thanked some people who mentioned me before, if you mention me, I'll feature you. Plain and simple ;)
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol we all have those animalistic sides of us though I try to b a pasafist often
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Professional Writer
Lol, I see :'3

-Chennie :iconwordofchen:
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yup but not when I write m phycotic then
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graveyardancing45 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I am loving the beat and the emotion of determination. Its effervescent in every line. 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Professional Writer
Thank you, I hope to improve on it though ^^

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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StellaStarfish Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Student General Artist
I like it :) it's a good com beck piece... You're coming out fighting!! :D
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Professional Writer
Course I am, I'm always comin' out fighting x'D

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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SilverMoon9897 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This made me think of the fight scene from the Sherlock movie :XD:
also, I think it's really cool.  There aren't a lot of good rap songs, and I think this one would be amazing :D
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Professional Writer
Well, I've still got a lot to learn, but through practice is how we improve ^^

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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SilverMoon9897 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Indeed :)
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LPeebles Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I couldn't resist writing this: lpeebles.deviantart.com/art/Ma…
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Professional Writer
Excellent!

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Professional Writer
I know I did x'D

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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Michael-J-Hawk Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My first thought when I read the title:

"Sir, you have insulted my honor. I demand satisfaction!" XD

All jokes aside, I like the rappin Chennie as much as Chenbeard :) And I think I'll give that Mini-challenge a try when I get the chance.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Professional Writer
Bwahaha, yeah, I thought of it too and I was like, 'nah I have to use it for the title'

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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romantica12 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, this is fantastic peice of lyrical poetry indeed; it sounds very, very excellent to the old-school rap style! :D 

Of course, for the money part of rapping artists; whatever happened to rapping about something significant? I suppose 'money' is how the world goes around in the entertainment industry I suppose. ;^;
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Professional Writer
Thanks for the kind comment ^^ I definitely want to do more works in that style :'3

But yeah, rap is no longer meaningful sadly :/

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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romantica12 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You are quite welcome to whatever you feel comfortable writing about, it never ceases to amaze your fans. :3

On the mainstream yes, but perhaps in some ways that there are other artists who make the genre itself meaningful. 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Professional Writer
I suppose so ^^

And thank you for the compliment, I'll try to stay amazing :iconlooolplz:

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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romantica12 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You are positively welcome, Sir Chenbeard. :3 
And stay positively amazing. ^^
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Professional Writer
You have my word ^^

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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