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Eagle Girl:

She soars above clouds,
Beloved, wild, unrestrained.
Ended by envy.

- Chen Yuan Wen, 27th January 2013
Arrr maties,

I'll be away from DA fer a bit, I'm doin' some secret trainin'. It only gives me time to post haikus...but...well in this sort of setting ye tend t' think 'em up naturally. Even me pirate accent be flowin' naturally. Th' smell o' th' sea really brings out somethin' different in ya.

I'll be back soon enough ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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This piece of work displays a single, well focused idea and manages to convey it without being overt. Did not deviate from the core theme.
Very fresh and new in its approach to the idea and wonderfully singular in its style and execution.
This work shows a proper, valid technique and while using a haiku the author has managed to stay true to his own unique style. However, the punctuation is not entirely grammatically correct. This can be overlooked based on the authors many previous works and the use of this particular technique.
Very thought provoking not only because of the subtlety inherent in a haiku but also because of the subject matter. The affect of the jealous masses on a single free individual is striking.
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moonahmed Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist
end is always interesting.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Professional Writer
Kehehe thanks ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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ReizYouUp Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
Nice Haiku. Ya gotta love the short and sweet ones.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank ye fer enjoyin' it me friend ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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ReizYouUp Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Thank ye fer makin' it.
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