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Disconnect Yourself [REMIX]:
Is it so easy to pull your wire
Out from the inside?
(The kiss of Cyanide)
You drank the poison
And lived a lie
(That you could not deny)
Weathering change
Your mind was like stone
But then it started to break...
Now drifting helplessly
You shattered like glass
Knowing that you're fake...
The empty shell, that you grew
Has started to come undone...
Piece by piece
You're breaking apart; and it weighs a ton!
The wire inside me
The blood in my veins
(A memory of an ancient pain)
Knowing that I
Am nothing but a fake
(The self you cast away)
Dreaming of times
When the world was simple
Not simply made of masks...
You lost yourself
When you took a sip
From the horrid poison glass...
So face yourself in the mirror
And look the person in the eye
Can you disconnect yourself from this vision
Or will you be the first to die?
"I dare you, to pull the wire..."
-Chen Yuan Wen ft. Rue (Relic-Angel), 14th March 2012
Is it so easy to pull your wire
Out from the inside?
(The kiss of Cyanide)
You drank the poison
And lived a lie
(That you could not deny)
Weathering change
Your mind was like stone
But then it started to break...
Now drifting helplessly
You shattered like glass
Knowing that you're fake...
The empty shell, that you grew
Has started to come undone...
Piece by piece
You're breaking apart; and it weighs a ton!
The wire inside me
The blood in my veins
(A memory of an ancient pain)
Knowing that I
Am nothing but a fake
(The self you cast away)
Dreaming of times
When the world was simple
Not simply made of masks...
You lost yourself
When you took a sip
From the horrid poison glass...
So face yourself in the mirror
And look the person in the eye
Can you disconnect yourself from this vision
Or will you be the first to die?
"I dare you, to pull the wire..."
-Chen Yuan Wen ft. Rue (Relic-Angel), 14th March 2012
Literature
My Masquerade
~My Masquerade~
For the world I am displayed;
They always watch but cannot see
through my masquerade.
I feel every moment fly;
My heart is beating, pulse racing,
breath held as I lie.
My innocence I can't defend;
I know that surely this will linger
'til my very end.
I brought this all upon myself;
Mask upon mask, lie upon lie
like valueless wealth.
Dare I take these masks off no!
My former self haunts me
everywhere I go.
False glory, false honor, false fame;
With all these masks I seem to have
forgotten my own name.
Literature
Wish for Privacy
I live behind a locked door,
And no one has the key.
It has been years, maybe more
Since someone talked to me.
The solitude was nice at first,
The quiet let me think.
But soon it took a turn for worse
Now all I do is blink.
So be careful, my dear friends,
When you wish for privacy.
Count to 5 when patience bends
Or you'll end up just like me.
Literature
The Man Who Burns
I am too sterile and static
I can feel you walking away
Into the arms of the man who burns
But then again why would you stay
He is so young and beautiful
He lives life while I rehearse
Acting upon his desires
While I write about mine in verse
Our love was Russian roulette
Without bullets in the chamber
Passing the gun back and forth
Without any sense of danger
The fire in your heart has gone now
This cliché is not lost on me
Metaphorically I'm the water
That dampened our destiny
You said you would never leave me
But this contract was never binding
I want you to find your freedom
If there's a freedom worth finding
Bey
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FAVE/COMMENT/SHARE/FEATURE:
Arrr maties, please feel free ta do one of the above (or all of the above if you like me enough). It's helping me in my career ^^
PERSONAL MESSAGE:
Arrr alright, this be me first remix. Courtesy of Rue and I'm rather pleased with the way it turned out.
As you can see from the original, I've gone into a more story-like aspect of the whole idea, which is what I tend to do with most works.
The disconnection of one from oneself can represent suicide, but not in a physical sense that leads to death but rather the death of a perceived personality or aspect of oneself that you perceive as tainted or destructive.
Overall it was extremely fun to work with this base and I give it a 4.5/5 star rating ^^
Please remember to view the original too (especially if you want to see what my work was derived from)
-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate
OTHER POEMS BY ME:
Lilith My Queen - [link]
Such Beautiful People - [link]
You Can't Stop Me - [link]
Struggling at Life -[link]
I Am So Disturbed - [link]
FAVE/COMMENT/SHARE/FEATURE:
Arrr maties, please feel free ta do one of the above (or all of the above if you like me enough). It's helping me in my career ^^
PERSONAL MESSAGE:
Arrr alright, this be me first remix. Courtesy of Rue and I'm rather pleased with the way it turned out.
As you can see from the original, I've gone into a more story-like aspect of the whole idea, which is what I tend to do with most works.
The disconnection of one from oneself can represent suicide, but not in a physical sense that leads to death but rather the death of a perceived personality or aspect of oneself that you perceive as tainted or destructive.
Overall it was extremely fun to work with this base and I give it a 4.5/5 star rating ^^
Please remember to view the original too (especially if you want to see what my work was derived from)
-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate
OTHER POEMS BY ME:
Lilith My Queen - [link]
Such Beautiful People - [link]
You Can't Stop Me - [link]
Struggling at Life -[link]
I Am So Disturbed - [link]
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I know this feeling so vividly... ... damn... how you've touched my heart with this...