LINK TO ORIGINAL BASE: [link]
Arrr maties, please feel free ta do one of the above (or all of the above if you like me enough). It's helping me in my career ^^
Arrr alright, this be me first remix. Courtesy of Rue
and I'm rather pleased with the way it turned out.
As you can see from the original, I've gone into a more story-like aspect of the whole idea, which is what I tend to do with most works.
The disconnection of one from oneself can represent suicide, but not in a physical sense that leads to death but rather the death of a perceived personality or aspect of oneself that you perceive as tainted or destructive.
Overall it was extremely fun to work with this base and I give it a 4.5/5 star rating ^^
Please remember to view the original too (especially if you want to see what my work was derived from)
-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate
OTHER POEMS BY ME:
Lilith My Queen - [link]
Such Beautiful People - [link]
You Can't Stop Me - [link]
Struggling at Life -[link]
I Am So Disturbed - [link]