Shop More Submit  Join Login
×

:iconwordofchen: More from WordOfChen


Featured in Collections

More poems by BrutalBone

Text by jessicarabbit9519

Literature by Cryptid-Girl


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
August 13, 2013
Submitted with
Sta.sh Writer
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
3,482 (1 today)
Favourites
340 (who?)
Comments
107
×
Dear Father, I loved you,
But this truth I shall say.

That you were the demon, 
that made me this way!

And though I am hiding,
It's hard when it's lurking beneath:
This anger and hatred,
It's all I believe.

So don't speak or I'll hurt you,
I'm sorry, I'm sorry,
But you are the ending,
Of this broken story.

So tell me, dear Father,
What can you say,
To boy whom you twisted;
When you pushed him away.
Arrr maties,

This has been a commission fer :iconthislittlebluebird:

Audio for this poem can be found here: snd.sc/15zqEPa

She's an incredible artist and I urge you to check out her works. The image for this poem can be found here: fav.me/d64osve

If you too would like some poetry or a flash fiction done remember

:iconpointcommissionsask:

I am now available for commissions and you can check my journal for all details :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
Add a Comment:
 
:iconpervisage:
pervisage Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Writer
The injuries of the heart are the easiest to make worse and the hardest to fix.
The reason is quite obvious (for those who don't know I will tell you)
The heart is nothing but a well, and the water are the emotions that you have at that time in your life
Love, compassion, sympathy, friendship, kinship, romance and protectiveness are the waters you want inside your well, for they will make the people around your well happy, healthy and most of all kind with your well.
Hatred, jealousy, envy, anger, lust for power and ignorance are the types of water you DON'T want in your well, for those who drink of that water shall become nasty, vile, aggressive, incencitive and violent with those around making the life around the well nothing but a living hell.
Here are the types of injuries the well can suffer.
Gaseous types: are always the easiest to fix for those types never go deep into the well, these types of injuries are trivial to the well and don't affect it
Liquid types: are not that easy to fix, for they will intoxicate the water inside the well and make it go toxic; hatred, jelousy and greed are the main causes for the water of your well go to toxic
Solid types: these are the hardest to fix and sometimes they simply can't be fixed at all. The causes of those types of injuries are betrayal, abuse and being distant. For those injuries are ice that will (and normally shall) turn the water of your well into ice, making life impossible around the well.
What do you think Cpt. Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates?
Reply
:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Professional Writer
To me...injuries are injuries, I rarely differentiate. However, I do remember them all and I keep them close at heart for the time when I can avenge them sevenfold.

And I am no longer a Captain...just Chenbeard the Pirate now ;3

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
Reply
:iconcardfue:
cardfue Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is a poem my sons would understand all too well...nice!
Reply
:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Professional Writer
I see, thank you very much for enjoying ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

Reply
:iconcardfue:
cardfue Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome:-)
Reply
:iconwhysoseriousfriends:
WhySoSeriousFriends Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This really hit me hard because I can relate to it so easily, thank you.
Reply
:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Professional Writer
I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^


-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

Reply
:iconauthorofthings:
authorofthings Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
my dad and i get along, but this is nicely written, haha
Reply
:iconwordofchen:
WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

Reply
:icongilpires:
GilPires Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Thumbs UP!
Reply
Add a Comment: