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Dear Father, I loved you,
But this truth I shall say.

That you were the demon, 
that made me this way!

And though I am hiding,
It's hard when it's lurking beneath:
This anger and hatred,
It's all I believe.

So don't speak or I'll hurt you,
I'm sorry, I'm sorry,
But you are the ending,
Of this broken story.

So tell me, dear Father,
What can you say,
To boy whom you twisted;
When you pushed him away.
Arrr maties,

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-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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pervisage Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Writer
The injuries of the heart are the easiest to make worse and the hardest to fix.
The reason is quite obvious (for those who don't know I will tell you)
The heart is nothing but a well, and the water are the emotions that you have at that time in your life
Love, compassion, sympathy, friendship, kinship, romance and protectiveness are the waters you want inside your well, for they will make the people around your well happy, healthy and most of all kind with your well.
Hatred, jealousy, envy, anger, lust for power and ignorance are the types of water you DON'T want in your well, for those who drink of that water shall become nasty, vile, aggressive, incencitive and violent with those around making the life around the well nothing but a living hell.
Here are the types of injuries the well can suffer.
Gaseous types: are always the easiest to fix for those types never go deep into the well, these types of injuries are trivial to the well and don't affect it
Liquid types: are not that easy to fix, for they will intoxicate the water inside the well and make it go toxic; hatred, jelousy and greed are the main causes for the water of your well go to toxic
Solid types: these are the hardest to fix and sometimes they simply can't be fixed at all. The causes of those types of injuries are betrayal, abuse and being distant. For those injuries are ice that will (and normally shall) turn the water of your well into ice, making life impossible around the well.
What do you think Cpt. Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates?
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Professional Writer
To me...injuries are injuries, I rarely differentiate. However, I do remember them all and I keep them close at heart for the time when I can avenge them sevenfold.

And I am no longer a Captain...just Chenbeard the Pirate now ;3

-Chenbeard the Pirate :iconwordofchen:
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cardfue Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is a poem my sons would understand all too well...nice!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Professional Writer
I see, thank you very much for enjoying ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

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cardfue Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome:-)
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WhySoSeriousFriends Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This really hit me hard because I can relate to it so easily, thank you.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Professional Writer
I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^


-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

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authorofthings Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
my dad and i get along, but this is nicely written, haha
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

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GilPires Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Thumbs UP!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Pchoberry Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow. Very powerful, I love it!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you very much for enjoying it :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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PokeJoke Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
I dont like My dad too
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
haha, it was just a commission, but I can understand your feelings.

I actually get along great with my dad x'3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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PokeJoke Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
well sometimes he's nice but he's not the best dad u can get
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DeeryDeerth Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is really powerful and it dug deep into my emotions. I really love this one. I can see your literature skill hasn't gone down in one bit.

May I also tell you, Cap'n, I am fully back and soon I'll be clearing your literature and journal rabble from my inbox like never before. ;)

And that also means... The Ship Artist shall return to Sangue-Padre once again!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you kindly for enjoying it my dear :3

Glad to have you back on board ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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DeeryDeerth Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aye, Cap'n, you're most welcome! :)

Thank you. :meow:
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Dark-funhouse Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Related :( Except that I'm a girl 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
I see, well cheer up, things will get better ^^

Thank you for enjoying my work though and if you ever want something commissioned, I'm your go to guy :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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scarlette13 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
May I ask something? How you make the text to be in the middle of page?
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Use the sta.sh writer to write it ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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scarlette13 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
thanks  for advice, IŽll try it
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sockdaemon Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

< div align=-"center">

 

Type that code, without the space between "<" and "d", and it should work.

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scarlette13 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Thank you for advice, IŽll try it.
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spookjuh17 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
very strong and very beautiful!
I like it (:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you very much for enjoying my work ^^

If you ever want something commissioned, feel free to hit me up :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Anastasia122 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have the same relationship with my father. I hate him for many reasons.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
I see, well things can definitely improve (^_^)/

I should probably say this was just a commission though and I get along great with my dad x'D

Anyhow, if you ever want something written, I'm the guy to commission ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Anastasia122 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 Okey. 

 Oh, ok... 

 Oh, thanks. It's good. Maybe...
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
(^_^)/ *pets your head* x'3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Anastasia122 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 :)
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PokeJoke Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Same here
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Anastasia122 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, I know. It's awful.
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PokeJoke Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Yeah....
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Anastasia122 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 It's not fair. He scolds me or teases on nonsense :dead:
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PokeJoke Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Same here too
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Anastasia122 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 I am glad. Heh... That someone understand me :meow:
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PokeJoke Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
I Watched u =^^=
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PokeJoke Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Me too ^^, one time My little brother could not read The clock and My dad pushed him and he felt on The ground
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thatenglishguy Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
I can relate...
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you for enjoying my work. Glad you could relate to the commish :3

If you ever have anything you want written, I'm the guy to call for it ;3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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KuraiOkamiTenshi Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Oh my god....I never thought I'd find a poem so close to the relationship with my own dad...amazing, in a terrible way.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
And your icon suits your words so well it actually looks like patrick is saying them x'3

Anyway, thank you so much for enjoying my work ^^

If you ever need anything commissioned, feel free to send me a note :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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KuraiOkamiTenshi Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
Heh...
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KuraiOkamiTenshi Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
I mean, the poem is great! It's just scary how close it is to me...
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NuFinalSaber Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013

......  Gawddammit.

 

This is good.  But I shouldn't have read it.

Time to go blow stuff up to make myself feel better.

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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Aye, it's what I do too x'3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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CrystalisRC Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
reminds me of my own father...he works for Coca Cola
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