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Cold Lying Creature:

Cold and arrogant slithering beast, your tongue is forked with lies
Do you intend to take my dignity or perhaps to sully my eyes?
No matter how much you speak of warmth; affection, care or love
I know that you are simple twisted; an assassin from above

Did you think I would not see the truth, or perhaps you thought me blind?
Perhaps you felt you could deceive this man, for he is simply kind
Woe is me the naive fool, taken in by your stories of harder times
Sadly my dear, I'm an utter sadist and the punishment will fit the crime.

I will lash your body, with the best of whips; let the leather bite in close
And then I'll let you hang for awhile, whilst you stare at me morose.
Why so serious, do I frighten you badly, is this not what you want?
When you slithered into my happy home, it was a vicious seed you sought to plant

But frankly I'm evil, much more than you are, I am the darkness beneath your bed
I'm afraid that when you close your eyes, it's me you see inside your head
Do you remember now, those horrid dreams, where I chased you through the door?
I'm sorry you cannot answer now, you're dead upon the floor

"Ugh, and I just got these tiles sparkling clean! You shouldn't have done that..."

-Chen Yuan Wen, 19th May 2012
I found me a good piece o' the Captain's poetry, I hope he don't mind me postin' it fer ye xD

I hope yer all grateful ta be gettin' this, I spent hours scourin' tha dark seas ta find it fer ye tonight!

-First Mate Hayes :iconelizabethswanplz:
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Manigran Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
And the last line made me laugh.
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Manigran Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Powerful; can hear a strong voice behind this!
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ZhivagoDarke Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, the last line is priceless.
'Pologies for this, but you'll probably have lots of faves from me in the next few hours...or HOUR, since I haven't had a look at most of your works after this ^^;; just a heads up!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Professional Writer
That's alright, BRING IT ON MATE! :3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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ZhivagoDarke Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HYAHAHAHA! Gotcha, unofficial Cap'n~
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InuskiXD Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So Beautiful :love:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you so much Ina ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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InuskiXD Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*-*
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Shiatanni Featured By Owner May 21, 2012
nope, nope and deffinatly not!, sorry captain but you lost me at sadist
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Krusnik03 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You did very nicely in finding a good poem. ^^
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