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Beloved:

Perfectly pleasant
With a bright radiant smile
If only for me...

-Chen Yuan Wen, 4th January 2013
Hey ya'll,

Officially coming back tomorrow, but just wanted to end my little journey with this haiku I composed.

Hope you all enjoy it :3

Tomorrow I'll unveil my newest project and newest ideas. Till then adios, I gotta sleep, tired from all this mental journeying.

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:

P.S. Yeaaah no accent, doesn't come out when I'm tired x3
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Janee018 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Professional Artist
So beautiful :') and simple :) Love it! :)
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Tarvitus Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013
Wow, impressive. I love this haiku!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you for enjoying it friend ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Tarvitus Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
You're very welcome :)
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EllyGirl2809 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww how cute, I didn't realise it was a haiku at first but after reading the description I got it. I suck at haikus, maybe I should write them more often ^^;
Anyway great job :3
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Professional Writer
Glad ye liked it xD

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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EllyGirl2809 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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naiangloria Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
how i always wish too... :date:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Aye ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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angelgirlartist Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay, you are going to be back!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Aye, tonight be me time and I'll be back in a flash ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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chakramqueenCMS Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
Mate, did ye know the charact'r known by this here name? She is no pleasant lass.
Look up a book by the same title.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Cara! Yer back :3 Glad t' see ya ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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chakramqueenCMS Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
Hiya cap'n, as I was sayin' there be a series where the protagonist is named Cara and the antagonist is Beloved. So ye can see why I might get edgy with the name.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Professional Writer
...never heard of such a weird series xD

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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chakramqueenCMS Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
It be called the Unicorn Chronicles by Bruce Coville
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aluckystar Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
I love this haiku, and am looking forward to your unveiling tommorow. :D
See ya then!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Aye, me too ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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HanaFa732 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
With such romantic writing, it seemed like the minds of Shakespeare and a great haiku writer had just married.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Tis not great yet, one day it will be but not yet. I have to improve it Mwahahaha! :3

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Zephyras-Lied Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student General Artist
A cool haiku. For some reason, it makes me believe that the guy could almost be insane or jealous, looking enviously at a beautiful girl he wants to have. Just my look on the poem. Anyway, keep up the great work, and can't wait for your official return!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Hehe, that's one great interpretation ;3

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Moodyhue Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awe, just a little bite of bittersweet before your return I see. My mailbox has been getting a lot of haiku(?) or just more compact pieces lately. Hm, it's almost like the time it seemed like everyone wore peacock green at my college one day. o.o;
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Well more compact poems be me forte fer th' time bein' ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Moodyhue Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yush. o3o
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MintyMintamin Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're coming back tomorrow?
He he, you'll be back for my mother's birthday~!

Coincidence?
I think not. . .

Maybe for a birthday present, I should show her some of your work, or maybe that book I've been meaning to buy >.>;

^^; i really need a job. ^^;

Well, I'm glad you're coming back!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Hehe, buy it as and when ye can. Yer mother's birthday be today do it. Well there is a poem titled 'Mother' in me gallery it's bittersweet but you should check it out ^^

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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MintyMintamin Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Will do ^^

*is still amazed how quickly you answer me when you come back*
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