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Battle Scars:

Sharp claws rake into my skin
as my blood bursts forth to splatter against the ground
The uneven breathing of my foe
tells me that he too is wounded and close to death

I can see his teeth, flecked with frothing saliva
foaming and spitting as he bellows his name
He charges into me, his frame crashing with mine
the impact has me reeling and I fall back against the stone

The ground feels cold
the icy chill seeping into my bones
the warmth of my blood escapes me
and I can feel myself beginning to fade

Up toward the sky I glance
praying that I might receive assistance
I pray that he who commands me, he who stands above
Will pity his servant and relieve me of this pain...

Yet, my prayers go unheard
Here I lie, slowly fading
slowly drifting into the grey ocean
as the voice that commands me utters my fate:

"Pikachu, use Thunderbolt NOW!"

-Chen Yuan Wen, Experimental Release
Tha Captain was playing around with tha idea o' pokemon and he wanted t' experiment with getting into tha thoughts o' tha pokemon, who in real life would be battling an' takin' serious wounds, so all o' that was put into perspective with a nice twist at tha end t' sort of say what it was about. Had t' place it under humour because, no where else t' put it really.

Enjoy and don't forget t' fave if ye liked ^^

-Co-captain Hayes :iconlugialuvr13:
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mandarijntjes Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
pretty funny at first i had no idea it was about pokemon until i read the last sentence haha. like it!
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PhoenixOfWinterfell Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Writer
Wow... That is an awesome way of making a poem about Pokemon! To be truthful, I wasn't expecting that ending :D Great work!
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Feanor-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I haven't been a poke fan in a looong while... but WOW! Did you spin it awesomely! I didn't see it coming through all of the epicness until the last line!
If pokemon were a book, written like this, I'd be obsessed with it! Very well played, my friend! :D
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you for enjoying this xD

I'm sorry my thanks came so very late. I tend to be late on replies sometimes...for a long time

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
P.S. I know this is like weeks late. So Sorry :c
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xyvette Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
THIZZ IZZ COOOLLLLL!!! EVERY LAST SENTENCE OF URS IS STUNNING AND UNEXPECTED!!! >W<
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you for enjoying this xD

I'm sorry my thanks came so very late. I tend to be late on replies sometimes...for a long time

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
P.S. I know this is like months late. Oh god I fail (.x.)
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xyvette Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
is okay~ ;)~ i dun mind u reply late as long as you keep working on ur poetries~ :)
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Soulmech1 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
wow really nice twist who new pokemon had it so tough
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you for enjoying this xD

I'm sorry my thanks came so very late. I tend to be late on replies sometimes...for a long time

-Captain Chen of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
P.S. I know this is like months late. Oh god I fail (.x.)
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TwiUnderSeeker Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
Great Job.
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