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A Game We Hate to Play:

I stand amongst a screaming crowd,
And you'll hear them shout it out.
"All this shit just isn't fair,
Life's a game but we don't care!"


-

Hear me, do you think I'm lazy?
When I talk I'm crazy,
Sorry I'm just hazy, but I-
Still think that I'm like Jay-Z
Rappin' here with Stacy;
The boys they call her baby; Haha...

And we're playin' this song for the killers,
The ones with no hope workin' shop at the tillers.

And if you think that we're just the fillers,
You wouldn't be wrong; we're just grain at millers - haha!

-

All this shit just isn't fair,
Life's a game but we don't care!
We're gonna change the game tonight,
C'mon let's turn out the light!


All this shit just isn't fair,
Life's a game but we don't care!
We're gonna change the rules tonight,
C'mon let's turn out the light.


-

Lights off, everybody nights off,
Walking through these streets of -
People drinkin' Smirnoff;
Everybody's sorrows,
Prayers for tomorrows,
Whisper as they borrow,
Cash for all the sorrow-oh-oh...

I guess the cycle is still vicious;
Debt piling higher than a pile of children's wishes.

And if you think it's over better look before you leap,
I'm staring at the bones that the people have to keep-ah.

-

All this shit just isn't fair,
Life's a game but we don't care!
We're gonna change the game tonight,
C'mon let's turn out the light!


All this shit just isn't fair,
Life's a game but we don't care!
We're gonna change the rules tonight,
C'mon let's turn out the light.




-Unfinished piece by Chen Yuan Wen ft. Stacy-Mace, 4th April 2013
Alright everyone,

Co-captain Bunny Hayes~ Pyon <3 (Omg, I don't get paid enough to say this embarassing crap)

*Ahem* Anyway, here is one of the Captain's unfinished and NEVER to be finished works. It was based off the song 'Run This Town Tonight' by Jay-Z I do believe.

The Captain wrote it awhile back and its strange how relevant it is now. The italics are provided by a friend of his who chose to be called (and I don't know why she wanted this name) "Stacy-Mace".

Essentially the beat is somewhat similar to that of the song and that is primarily the reason why this was never finished or released. However, you can enjoy it for now as a filler piece until the Captain is over his immense depression.

Good news though, he is at least accepting food and water and leaves his room to do crazy things in the middle of the night (like he always does) so I have hope that he'll return to us in a week or so. Until then, enjoy the Bunny-Hayes show~ PYON <3

(I seriously need to get a raise for all this .3.)

-Co-Captain Bunny Hayes
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Maj0rMareMolester Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That was top-notch lyricism during the verses but the chorus was a bit boring. All around it was a good poem/rap but I still feel disappointed that it wasn't all it could be, in my humble opinion...
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noorelven Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
hehehe neat beat :D (never heard the song though :S )
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dragonofyang Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellently written!
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angelgirlartist Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Never heard the song but like this piece.

Tell him to get better soon. He's awesome. And you are too.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Haha I'll let him know, and thank you ^^

-Co-Captain Bunny Hayes
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candyzombielord Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha. yes you do. i'm sad this was never finished. it's really good.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Yes I agree aha

-Co-Captain Bunny Hayes
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candyzombielord Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Enemv33 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's amazing. I can"t be leave that this wasn't released in full.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Professional Writer
The Captain creates many pieces which are amazing that he chose not to post, luckily I have the chance to show you guys some of them while he's away aha

-Co-Captain Bunny Hayes
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